Paragraph Writing 写段落
基础大楷 + 句号。
- 段落结构：主题句 → 小节两三句 → 感受句。
- 主题句一句讲完重点：My favourite hobby is reading.
- 用 First / Then / After that 排事情次序。
文体小知识：Write a short paragraph.
§课文原文 Passage
1Last Saturday, I went to the wet market with my mother for the first time. She writes a shopping list before we go. On the list, the words are in small letters, and I help her read them. The market was crowded and noisy, but it was very interesting.
2First, we bought fresh fish from the fish stall. Then we bought vegetables, eggs and some fruit. A kind uncle gave me a sweet orange for free. Mother taught me how to choose fresh vegetables and how to ask for a good price. On the way out, we bought two bottles of soy milk.
3I carried the heavy bags and helped her walk home. At home, we cooked a big lunch together. I wrote a short paragraph in my diary about the trip. I checked my spelling with the dictionary, just like my teacher says. It is one of my happiest Saturdays this year. I hope I can go to the market again soon.
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Last Saturday, I went to the wet market with my mother for the first time.
上个星期六，我第一次跟妈妈去街市。
She writes a shopping list before we go.
出发之前，他会先写好一张购物清单。
On the list, the words are in small letters, and I help her read them.
清单上面的字小小的，我会帮他看。
The market was crowded and noisy, but it was very interesting.
街市又挤又吵，不过我觉得好有趣。
First, we bought fresh fish from the fish stall.
首先，我们在鱼摊买了一条新鲜的鱼。
Then we bought vegetables, eggs and some fruit.
然后买了菜、鸡蛋同水果。
A kind uncle gave me a sweet orange for free.
有个好心的叔叔还请我吃了一个甜橙。
Mother taught me how to choose fresh vegetables and how to ask for a good price.
妈妈教会我怎样挑选新鲜蔬菜，还有怎样问价。
On the way out, we bought two bottles of soy milk.
走出去的时候，我们买了两瓶豆浆。
I carried the heavy bags and helped her walk home.
我帮忙拿着那些重重的袋子，扶着妈妈一起走回家。
At home, we cooked a big lunch together.
回到家，我们一起煮了餐丰富的午餐。
I wrote a short paragraph in my diary about the trip.
我在日记里写了一段关于这次去街市的事。
I checked my spelling with the dictionary, just like my teacher says.
我按照老师说的，用字典检查了串字。
It is one of my happiest Saturdays this year.
这一天是我今年其中一个最开心的星期六。
I hope I can go to the market again soon.
我希望很快可以再去街市。
1重点摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句号。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
写。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句号。
串字。
文法。
检查。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 第一句：主题句举个例子：My favourite hobby is reading. 主题句一句说明整段的中心，让读者立刻知道这段要讲什么。主题句通常放在段首，写法要概括而具体：概括是指只讲一个主题，具体是指点明是哪一个爱好、哪一件事；动笔前先问自己：这段最想说明的重点是什么？写成一句就是主题句。
- 第二、三句：加细节举个例子：I read books every night. Books take me to different worlds. 主题句之后用两三句细节支撑：可以说什么时候做（every night）、为什么喜欢（take me to different worlds）、怎样做。细节要围绕主题句选材，与阅读无关的句子不要放进来；每个细节各占一句，段落便有血有肉。
- 用连接词排次序举个例子：First... Then... After that... First, we bought fish. Then we bought vegetables. 记叙段落用 First、Then、After that、Finally 把事情按次序连接，读者便跟得上进度。连接词是段落的路标，没有它们，句子就像散落的珠子；写记叙文时先排好事情次序，再逐句加上连接词。
- 每句大写加句号举个例子：一个段落可能有四、五句，每一句的开头都要大写，结尾都要有句号，一句都不能漏。段落由句子组成，句子格式不齐，段落便算不上完整；检查方法是用笔尖逐句点过去，点一句查一句的大写与句号。这个动作只需一分钟，却能避免整段的格式失分，非常值得养成习惯。
- 尾句：感受总结举个例子：I learn many new things. It is one of my happiest Saturdays. 段落最后一句交代感受或总结，令段落有收结而不会突然停止；感受句可以说学到什么、心情怎样，或用一句总结全段。写完主题句与细节后，问自己：我想留给读者什么感觉？把那句写下来放在最后，段落便圆满。
- 通读检查举个例子：整段写完后出声读一次，听听哪一句不顺口、哪两句之间缺少连接；不顺的句子就修改，漏了连接词就补上。出声读是段落检查最有效的办法，因为耳朵比眼睛更容易发现断裂的地方；读的时候顺便检查每句开头大写与句尾标点，一次过完成两项检查。
5例题示范 Example
问题：怎样由一句主题句开始，逐步扩写成一个完整段落？
- 第一步：写主题句：My favourite hobby is reading.，一句定出整段的中心。
- 第二步：加习惯细节：I read books every night.，说明什么时候做这件事。
- 第三步：加原因或感受：Books take me to different worlds.，解释为什么喜欢。
- 第四步：加收获：I learn many new things.，说出这个爱好带给你的东西。
- 第五步：整段通读一次，逐句检查句首大写与句尾标点，不顺的句子立即修改。
- 答案：示范答案：My favourite hobby is reading. I read books every night. Books take me to different worlds. I learn many new things.——主题句、细节、感受俱全，就是一个完整段落。
6常见错误 Mistakes
75 题快测 Quick check
Q1写句子要？
Q2写段落要？
Q3写完要？
Q4一段里面，主题句有多少句？
Q5段落写完要做什么？
8重点回顾 Recap
- 段落结构：主题句 → 小节两三句 → 感受句。
- 主题句一句讲完重点：My favourite hobby is reading.
- 用 First / Then / After that 排事情次序。
- 一段一个主题，不要贪心。
- 写完出声读一次先算完成。