Simple Letter 简单书信

基础

大楷 + 句号。

适合:小四英国语文 · 单元:写作 · 建议学习路径第 15/17 课

学完呢课,你会识:
  • 书信五件套:称呼 → 问好 → 近况 → 祝福 → 署名。
  • Dear + 称呼加逗号:Dear Grandma,
  • 一段讲一件事,不要一口气塞全。
文体:Writing有声朗读

文体小知识:Write a short letter.

作者

英国语文English Language

§课文原文 Passage

1Dear Grandma, How are you? I miss you very much. My school life is busy and happy. The weather in Hong Kong is getting hotter now. I am writing this letter at my desk after dinner, and the whole family says hello to you.

2My best subject is English, and my teacher says I write good sentences. Last month, our class visited the Science Museum. We saw many interesting robots there, and I asked the guide lots of questions. I got full marks in my spelling test too. My grammar is getting better because I check my homework every night.

3After school, I help my mother water the plants on our balcony. On Sundays, I play table tennis with my father in the park. Please take care of your health, and remember to wear a warm coat. Mum says we will take the train and stay for a week. I hope to visit you in Guangzhou this summer. Love, Wing-yan.

§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation

Dear Grandma, How are you?

亲爱的外婆,你好吗?

I miss you very much.

我很挂念你。

My school life is busy and happy.

我的校园生活又忙又开心。

The weather in Hong Kong is getting hotter now.

香港的天气现在越来越热。

I am writing this letter at my desk after dinner, and the whole family says hello to you.

我晚饭后在书桌前写这封信,全家人都同你问好。

My best subject is English, and my teacher says I write good sentences.

我最好的科目是英文,老师说我写的句子很好。

Last month, our class visited the Science Museum.

上个月,我们班去了参观科学馆。

We saw many interesting robots there, and I asked the guide lots of questions.

我们见到好多有趣的机械人,我还问了导赏员好多问题。

I got full marks in my spelling test too.

我串字测验还拿了满分呢。

My grammar is getting better because I check my homework every night.

因为我每晚都会检查功课,所以文法越来越好。

After school, I help my mother water the plants on our balcony.

放学之后,我会帮妈妈在露台浇花。

On Sundays, I play table tennis with my father in the park.

星期日,我会同爸爸在公园打乒乓球。

Please take care of your health, and remember to wear a warm coat.

你要好好保重身体,记得多穿一件衣服呀。

Mum says we will take the train and stay for a week.

妈妈说我们会搭火车去,住一个星期。

I hope to visit you in Guangzhou this summer.

我好希望今年夏天可以去广州探你。

Love, Wing-yan.

爱你的,咏欣。

1重点摘要 Summary

大楷 + 句号。

2生字卡 Vocabulary

w
write动词

写。

s
sentence名词

句子。

p
paragraph名词

段落。

c
capital名词

大楷。

f
full stop短语

句号。

s
spelling名词

串字。

g
grammar名词

文法。

c
check动词

检查。

3逐步讲解 Steps

  1. 格式一:称呼举个例子:信的第一行顶格写 Dear Grandma,(亲爱的婆婆),Dear 后面接收信人称呼,结尾一定要有逗号。称呼决定了整封信的语气:写给长辈或老师用姓名加称谓,例如 Dear Miss Lee;写给好朋友可以直呼名字,例如 Dear Mary。漏了逗号是书信最常见的格式错误,下笔前先检查这一行。
  2. 格式二:开场问好举个例子:How are you? I miss you very much. 信的头一、两句先问候对方,再进入正文,这是书信的礼貌。可以先答谢对方的来信:Thank you for your letter.,再问对方近况;易错位是一开始就说自己的事,显得唐突。问候语不必长,两句以内,温暖就已足够。
  3. 格式三:中段说近况举个例子:My best subject is English. Last month, our class visited the Science Museum. 信的中段是主要内容,一次讲一件事,一段一件事,条理便清晰。写近况可以说学校生活、家庭活动或最新趣事,已发生的事用过去式记录;把最重要的事放在前面,细节辅助其后,对方读起来才有重点。
  4. 格式四:结尾祝福举个例子:Please take care of your health. I hope to visit you this summer. 信尾向对方送上祝福或表达期望,令信有温暖的收结。祝福语按对象调整:长辈宜祝健康,朋友宜祝愉快或期待再见;也可以提出希望,例如盼望暑假见面。祝福语放在正文之后、署名之前,一两句便够。
  5. 格式五:署名举个例子:结尾语 Love, 或 Yours, 写在右下方,换行再写自己的名字 Wing-yan。给家人朋友用 Love、Best wishes;给老师或较正式的对象用 Yours,语气更端庄。结尾语后面同样要加逗号,名字写在下一行;漏了署名,对方便不知道是谁写的信,这是不可省略的部分。
  6. 写完检查举个例子:信写完后按五个位置逐项检查:称呼、问候、近况、祝福、署名,一个都不能漏。再把全文读一次,检查每句大写与标点,特别是称呼与署名后的逗号;若时间允许,隔十五分钟再读一次,往往能发现新的错处。书信格式分是白送的分数,五项齐全就能拿满。

5例题示范 Example

问题:怎样写一封五句而格式齐全的简单书信给朋友?

  1. 第一步:顶格写称呼:Dear Mary,,亲切又合乎格式,逗号不能少。
  2. 第二步:答谢对方来信:Thank you for your letter.,这是有礼貌的开场。
  3. 第三步:报告近况:I am fine. I like my new school.,两句交代自己的情况。
  4. 第四步:送上祝语:Please write soon.,期待对方回信,书信便有来有往。
  5. 第五步:署名:Yours, 换行写 Sue,结尾语与名字各占一行。
  6. 答案:示范答案:Dear Mary,
    Thank you for your letter. I am fine. I like my new school. Please write soon.
    Yours,
    Sue

6常见错误 Mistakes

✗ Dear Grandma 没有逗号
✓ Dear Grandma,(Dear 后面要逗号)
✗ i miss you very much.
✓ I miss you very much.(I 永远大楷)
✗ 信写完即刻完,没有署名
✓ 结尾要 Love, / Yours, 换行写名
✗ 祝语用了 Goodbye
✓ 信尾用 Please write soon. / Take care. 不是口语 Goodbye

75 题快测 Quick check

Q1写句子要?

Q2写段落要?

Q3写完要?

Q4信的开头点写?

Q5信的结尾点写?

8重点回顾 Recap

  • 书信五件套:称呼 → 问好 → 近况 → 祝福 → 署名。
  • Dear + 称呼加逗号:Dear Grandma,
  • 一段讲一件事,不要一口气塞全。
  • 结尾祝语:Please write soon. / Take care.
  • 署名 Love, / Yours, 换行写名,一个都不可以漏。

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