Simple Letter 简单书信
基础大楷 + 句号。
- 书信五件套:称呼 → 问好 → 近况 → 祝福 → 署名。
- Dear + 称呼加逗号:Dear Grandma,
- 一段讲一件事,不要一口气塞全。
文体小知识:Write a short letter.
§课文原文 Passage
1Dear Grandma, How are you? I miss you very much. My school life is busy and happy. The weather in Hong Kong is getting hotter now. I am writing this letter at my desk after dinner, and the whole family says hello to you.
2My best subject is English, and my teacher says I write good sentences. Last month, our class visited the Science Museum. We saw many interesting robots there, and I asked the guide lots of questions. I got full marks in my spelling test too. My grammar is getting better because I check my homework every night.
3After school, I help my mother water the plants on our balcony. On Sundays, I play table tennis with my father in the park. Please take care of your health, and remember to wear a warm coat. Mum says we will take the train and stay for a week. I hope to visit you in Guangzhou this summer. Love, Wing-yan.
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Dear Grandma, How are you?
亲爱的外婆,你好吗?
I miss you very much.
我很挂念你。
My school life is busy and happy.
我的校园生活又忙又开心。
The weather in Hong Kong is getting hotter now.
香港的天气现在越来越热。
I am writing this letter at my desk after dinner, and the whole family says hello to you.
我晚饭后在书桌前写这封信,全家人都同你问好。
My best subject is English, and my teacher says I write good sentences.
我最好的科目是英文,老师说我写的句子很好。
Last month, our class visited the Science Museum.
上个月,我们班去了参观科学馆。
We saw many interesting robots there, and I asked the guide lots of questions.
我们见到好多有趣的机械人,我还问了导赏员好多问题。
I got full marks in my spelling test too.
我串字测验还拿了满分呢。
My grammar is getting better because I check my homework every night.
因为我每晚都会检查功课,所以文法越来越好。
After school, I help my mother water the plants on our balcony.
放学之后,我会帮妈妈在露台浇花。
On Sundays, I play table tennis with my father in the park.
星期日,我会同爸爸在公园打乒乓球。
Please take care of your health, and remember to wear a warm coat.
你要好好保重身体,记得多穿一件衣服呀。
Mum says we will take the train and stay for a week.
妈妈说我们会搭火车去,住一个星期。
I hope to visit you in Guangzhou this summer.
我好希望今年夏天可以去广州探你。
Love, Wing-yan.
爱你的,咏欣。
1重点摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句号。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
写。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句号。
串字。
文法。
检查。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 格式一:称呼举个例子:信的第一行顶格写 Dear Grandma,(亲爱的婆婆),Dear 后面接收信人称呼,结尾一定要有逗号。称呼决定了整封信的语气:写给长辈或老师用姓名加称谓,例如 Dear Miss Lee;写给好朋友可以直呼名字,例如 Dear Mary。漏了逗号是书信最常见的格式错误,下笔前先检查这一行。
- 格式二:开场问好举个例子:How are you? I miss you very much. 信的头一、两句先问候对方,再进入正文,这是书信的礼貌。可以先答谢对方的来信:Thank you for your letter.,再问对方近况;易错位是一开始就说自己的事,显得唐突。问候语不必长,两句以内,温暖就已足够。
- 格式三:中段说近况举个例子:My best subject is English. Last month, our class visited the Science Museum. 信的中段是主要内容,一次讲一件事,一段一件事,条理便清晰。写近况可以说学校生活、家庭活动或最新趣事,已发生的事用过去式记录;把最重要的事放在前面,细节辅助其后,对方读起来才有重点。
- 格式四:结尾祝福举个例子:Please take care of your health. I hope to visit you this summer. 信尾向对方送上祝福或表达期望,令信有温暖的收结。祝福语按对象调整:长辈宜祝健康,朋友宜祝愉快或期待再见;也可以提出希望,例如盼望暑假见面。祝福语放在正文之后、署名之前,一两句便够。
- 格式五:署名举个例子:结尾语 Love, 或 Yours, 写在右下方,换行再写自己的名字 Wing-yan。给家人朋友用 Love、Best wishes;给老师或较正式的对象用 Yours,语气更端庄。结尾语后面同样要加逗号,名字写在下一行;漏了署名,对方便不知道是谁写的信,这是不可省略的部分。
- 写完检查举个例子:信写完后按五个位置逐项检查:称呼、问候、近况、祝福、署名,一个都不能漏。再把全文读一次,检查每句大写与标点,特别是称呼与署名后的逗号;若时间允许,隔十五分钟再读一次,往往能发现新的错处。书信格式分是白送的分数,五项齐全就能拿满。
5例题示范 Example
问题:怎样写一封五句而格式齐全的简单书信给朋友?
- 第一步:顶格写称呼:Dear Mary,,亲切又合乎格式,逗号不能少。
- 第二步:答谢对方来信:Thank you for your letter.,这是有礼貌的开场。
- 第三步:报告近况:I am fine. I like my new school.,两句交代自己的情况。
- 第四步:送上祝语:Please write soon.,期待对方回信,书信便有来有往。
- 第五步:署名:Yours, 换行写 Sue,结尾语与名字各占一行。
- 答案:示范答案:Dear Mary,
Thank you for your letter. I am fine. I like my new school. Please write soon.
Yours,
Sue
6常见错误 Mistakes
75 题快测 Quick check
Q1写句子要?
Q2写段落要?
Q3写完要?
Q4信的开头点写?
Q5信的结尾点写?
8重点回顾 Recap
- 书信五件套:称呼 → 问好 → 近况 → 祝福 → 署名。
- Dear + 称呼加逗号:Dear Grandma,
- 一段讲一件事,不要一口气塞全。
- 结尾祝语:Please write soon. / Take care.
- 署名 Love, / Yours, 换行写名,一个都不可以漏。