Paragraph Writing 寫段落
基礎大楷 + 句號。
- 段落結構：主題句 → 小節兩三句 → 感受句。
- 主題句一句講完重點：My favourite hobby is reading.
- 用 First / Then / After that 排事情次序。
文體小知識：Write a short paragraph.
§課文原文 Passage
1Last Saturday, I went to the wet market with my mother for the first time. She writes a shopping list before we go. On the list, the words are in small letters, and I help her read them. The market was crowded and noisy, but it was very interesting.
2First, we bought fresh fish from the fish stall. Then we bought vegetables, eggs and some fruit. A kind uncle gave me a sweet orange for free. Mother taught me how to choose fresh vegetables and how to ask for a good price. On the way out, we bought two bottles of soy milk.
3I carried the heavy bags and helped her walk home. At home, we cooked a big lunch together. I wrote a short paragraph in my diary about the trip. I checked my spelling with the dictionary, just like my teacher says. It is one of my happiest Saturdays this year. I hope I can go to the market again soon.
§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Last Saturday, I went to the wet market with my mother for the first time.
上個星期六，我第一次跟媽媽去街市。
She writes a shopping list before we go.
出發之前，他會先寫好一張購物清單。
On the list, the words are in small letters, and I help her read them.
清單上面的字小小的，我會幫他看。
The market was crowded and noisy, but it was very interesting.
街市又擠又吵，不過我覺得好有趣。
First, we bought fresh fish from the fish stall.
首先，我們在魚攤買了一條新鮮的魚。
Then we bought vegetables, eggs and some fruit.
然後買了菜、雞蛋同水果。
A kind uncle gave me a sweet orange for free.
有個好心的叔叔還請我吃了一個甜橙。
Mother taught me how to choose fresh vegetables and how to ask for a good price.
媽媽教會我怎樣挑選新鮮蔬菜，還有怎樣問價。
On the way out, we bought two bottles of soy milk.
走出去的時候，我們買了兩瓶豆漿。
I carried the heavy bags and helped her walk home.
我幫忙拿着那些重重的袋子，扶着媽媽一起走回家。
At home, we cooked a big lunch together.
回到家，我們一起煮了餐豐富的午餐。
I wrote a short paragraph in my diary about the trip.
我在日記裡寫了一段關於這次去街市的事。
I checked my spelling with the dictionary, just like my teacher says.
我按照老師說的，用字典檢查了串字。
It is one of my happiest Saturdays this year.
這一天是我今年其中一個最開心的星期六。
I hope I can go to the market again soon.
我希望很快可以再去街市。
1重點摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句號。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
寫。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句號。
串字。
文法。
檢查。
3逐步講解 Steps
- 第一句：主題句舉個例子：My favourite hobby is reading. 主題句一句說明整段的中心，讓讀者立刻知道這段要講什麼。主題句通常放在段首，寫法要概括而具體：概括是指只講一個主題，具體是指點明是哪一個愛好、哪一件事；動筆前先問自己：這段最想說明的重點是什麼？寫成一句就是主題句。
- 第二、三句：加細節舉個例子：I read books every night. Books take me to different worlds. 主題句之後用兩三句細節支撐：可以說什麼時候做（every night）、為什麼喜歡（take me to different worlds）、怎樣做。細節要圍繞主題句選材，與閱讀無關的句子不要放進來；每個細節各佔一句，段落便有血有肉。
- 用連接詞排次序舉個例子：First... Then... After that... First, we bought fish. Then we bought vegetables. 記敘段落用 First、Then、After that、Finally 把事情按次序連接，讀者便跟得上進度。連接詞是段落的路標，沒有它們，句子就像散落的珠子；寫記敘文時先排好事情次序，再逐句加上連接詞。
- 每句大寫加句號舉個例子：一個段落可能有四、五句，每一句的開頭都要大寫，結尾都要有句號，一句都不能漏。段落由句子組成，句子格式不齊，段落便算不上完整；檢查方法是用筆尖逐句點過去，點一句查一句的大寫與句號。這個動作只需一分鐘，卻能避免整段的格式失分，非常值得養成習慣。
- 尾句：感受總結舉個例子：I learn many new things. It is one of my happiest Saturdays. 段落最後一句交代感受或總結，令段落有收結而不會突然停止；感受句可以說學到什麼、心情怎樣，或用一句總結全段。寫完主題句與細節後，問自己：我想留給讀者什麼感覺？把那句寫下來放在最後，段落便圓滿。
- 通讀檢查舉個例子：整段寫完後出聲讀一次，聽聽哪一句不順口、哪兩句之間缺少連接；不順的句子就修改，漏了連接詞就補上。出聲讀是段落檢查最有效的辦法，因為耳朵比眼睛更容易發現斷裂的地方；讀的時候順便檢查每句開頭大寫與句尾標點，一次過完成兩項檢查。
5例題示範 Example
問題：怎樣由一句主題句開始，逐步擴寫成一個完整段落？
- 第一步：寫主題句：My favourite hobby is reading.，一句定出整段的中心。
- 第二步：加習慣細節：I read books every night.，說明什麼時候做這件事。
- 第三步：加原因或感受：Books take me to different worlds.，解釋為什麼喜歡。
- 第四步：加收穫：I learn many new things.，說出這個愛好帶給你的東西。
- 第五步：整段通讀一次，逐句檢查句首大寫與句尾標點，不順的句子立即修改。
- 答案：示範答案：My favourite hobby is reading. I read books every night. Books take me to different worlds. I learn many new things.——主題句、細節、感受俱全，就是一個完整段落。
6常見錯誤 Mistakes
75 題快測 Quick check
Q1寫句子要？
Q2寫段落要？
Q3寫完要？
Q4一段裡面，主題句有多少句？
Q5段落寫完要做什麼？
8重點回顧 Recap
- 段落結構：主題句 → 小節兩三句 → 感受句。
- 主題句一句講完重點：My favourite hobby is reading.
- 用 First / Then / After that 排事情次序。
- 一段一個主題，不要貪心。
- 寫完出聲讀一次先算完成。