Simple Letter 簡單書信

基礎

大楷 + 句號。

適合:小四英國語文 · 單元:寫作 · 建議學習路徑第 15/17 課

學完呢課,你會識:
  • 書信五件套:稱呼 → 問好 → 近況 → 祝福 → 署名。
  • Dear + 稱呼加逗號:Dear Grandma,
  • 一段講一件事,不要一口氣塞全。
文體:Writing有聲朗讀

文體小知識:Write a short letter.

作者

英國語文English Language

§課文原文 Passage

1Dear Grandma, How are you? I miss you very much. My school life is busy and happy. The weather in Hong Kong is getting hotter now. I am writing this letter at my desk after dinner, and the whole family says hello to you.

2My best subject is English, and my teacher says I write good sentences. Last month, our class visited the Science Museum. We saw many interesting robots there, and I asked the guide lots of questions. I got full marks in my spelling test too. My grammar is getting better because I check my homework every night.

3After school, I help my mother water the plants on our balcony. On Sundays, I play table tennis with my father in the park. Please take care of your health, and remember to wear a warm coat. Mum says we will take the train and stay for a week. I hope to visit you in Guangzhou this summer. Love, Wing-yan.

§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation

Dear Grandma, How are you?

親愛的外婆,你好嗎?

I miss you very much.

我很掛念你。

My school life is busy and happy.

我的校園生活又忙又開心。

The weather in Hong Kong is getting hotter now.

香港的天氣現在越來越熱。

I am writing this letter at my desk after dinner, and the whole family says hello to you.

我晚飯後在書桌前寫這封信,全家人都同你問好。

My best subject is English, and my teacher says I write good sentences.

我最好的科目是英文,老師說我寫的句子很好。

Last month, our class visited the Science Museum.

上個月,我們班去了參觀科學館。

We saw many interesting robots there, and I asked the guide lots of questions.

我們見到好多有趣的機械人,我還問了導賞員好多問題。

I got full marks in my spelling test too.

我串字測驗還拿了滿分呢。

My grammar is getting better because I check my homework every night.

因為我每晚都會檢查功課,所以文法越來越好。

After school, I help my mother water the plants on our balcony.

放學之後,我會幫媽媽在露台澆花。

On Sundays, I play table tennis with my father in the park.

星期日,我會同爸爸在公園打乒乓球。

Please take care of your health, and remember to wear a warm coat.

你要好好保重身體,記得多穿一件衣服呀。

Mum says we will take the train and stay for a week.

媽媽說我們會搭火車去,住一個星期。

I hope to visit you in Guangzhou this summer.

我好希望今年夏天可以去廣州探你。

Love, Wing-yan.

愛你的,詠欣。

1重點摘要 Summary

大楷 + 句號。

2生字卡 Vocabulary

w
write動詞

寫。

s
sentence名詞

句子。

p
paragraph名詞

段落。

c
capital名詞

大楷。

f
full stop短語

句號。

s
spelling名詞

串字。

g
grammar名詞

文法。

c
check動詞

檢查。

3逐步講解 Steps

  1. 格式一:稱呼舉個例子:信的第一行頂格寫 Dear Grandma,(親愛的婆婆),Dear 後面接收信人稱呼,結尾一定要有逗號。稱呼決定了整封信的語氣:寫給長輩或老師用姓名加稱謂,例如 Dear Miss Lee;寫給好朋友可以直呼名字,例如 Dear Mary。漏了逗號是書信最常見的格式錯誤,下筆前先檢查這一行。
  2. 格式二:開場問好舉個例子:How are you? I miss you very much. 信的頭一、兩句先問候對方,再進入正文,這是書信的禮貌。可以先答謝對方的來信:Thank you for your letter.,再問對方近況;易錯位是一開始就說自己的事,顯得唐突。問候語不必長,兩句以內,溫暖就已足夠。
  3. 格式三:中段說近況舉個例子:My best subject is English. Last month, our class visited the Science Museum. 信的中段是主要內容,一次講一件事,一段一件事,條理便清晰。寫近況可以說學校生活、家庭活動或最新趣事,已發生的事用過去式記錄;把最重要的事放在前面,細節輔助其後,對方讀起來才有重點。
  4. 格式四:結尾祝福舉個例子:Please take care of your health. I hope to visit you this summer. 信尾向對方送上祝福或表達期望,令信有溫暖的收結。祝福語按對象調整:長輩宜祝健康,朋友宜祝愉快或期待再見;也可以提出希望,例如盼望暑假見面。祝福語放在正文之後、署名之前,一兩句便夠。
  5. 格式五:署名舉個例子:結尾語 Love, 或 Yours, 寫在右下方,換行再寫自己的名字 Wing-yan。給家人朋友用 Love、Best wishes;給老師或較正式的對象用 Yours,語氣更端莊。結尾語後面同樣要加逗號,名字寫在下一行;漏了署名,對方便不知道是誰寫的信,這是不可省略的部分。
  6. 寫完檢查舉個例子:信寫完後按五個位置逐項檢查:稱呼、問候、近況、祝福、署名,一個都不能漏。再把全文讀一次,檢查每句大寫與標點,特別是稱呼與署名後的逗號;若時間允許,隔十五分鐘再讀一次,往往能發現新的錯處。書信格式分是白送的分數,五項齊全就能拿滿。

5例題示範 Example

問題:怎樣寫一封五句而格式齊全的簡單書信給朋友?

  1. 第一步:頂格寫稱呼:Dear Mary,,親切又合乎格式,逗號不能少。
  2. 第二步:答謝對方來信:Thank you for your letter.,這是有禮貌的開場。
  3. 第三步:報告近況:I am fine. I like my new school.,兩句交代自己的情況。
  4. 第四步:送上祝語:Please write soon.,期待對方回信,書信便有來有往。
  5. 第五步:署名:Yours, 換行寫 Sue,結尾語與名字各佔一行。
  6. 答案:示範答案:Dear Mary,
    Thank you for your letter. I am fine. I like my new school. Please write soon.
    Yours,
    Sue

6常見錯誤 Mistakes

✗ Dear Grandma 沒有逗號
✓ Dear Grandma,(Dear 後面要逗號)
✗ i miss you very much.
✓ I miss you very much.(I 永遠大楷)
✗ 信寫完即刻完,沒有署名
✓ 結尾要 Love, / Yours, 換行寫名
✗ 祝語用了 Goodbye
✓ 信尾用 Please write soon. / Take care. 不是口語 Goodbye

75 題快測 Quick check

Q1寫句子要?

Q2寫段落要?

Q3寫完要?

Q4信的開頭點寫?

Q5信的結尾點寫?

8重點回顧 Recap

  • 書信五件套:稱呼 → 問好 → 近況 → 祝福 → 署名。
  • Dear + 稱呼加逗號:Dear Grandma,
  • 一段講一件事,不要一口氣塞全。
  • 結尾祝語:Please write soon. / Take care.
  • 署名 Love, / Yours, 換行寫名,一個都不可以漏。

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