Sentence Writing 寫句子
基礎大楷 + 句號。
- 題目用 title case：My School Bag。
- 結構：介紹 → 小節 → 習慣 → 感受。
- There is 一樣 / There are 多樣。
文體小知識：Write simple sentences.
§課文原文 Passage
1My School Bag
2This is my school bag. My mother gives it to me in September. It is blue and white, my favourite colours. There are two big pockets and one small pocket. I carry it to school every day.
3I keep my books inside the big pocket. My pencil case goes in the small pocket. I have a red pen, a green ruler and two pencils. There is a bottle of water beside my books. The bag is heavy on Mondays because I have many lessons.
4Every Friday, I clean my school bag. I take everything out and put the papers in the bin. Then I check my pencils and my eraser. My mother says a tidy bag helps me learn.
5My school bag is my good helper. It carries my books and my pencils to school and back home. I will take good care of it because it helps me every day.
§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation
My School Bag
我的書包（標題）
This is my school bag.
這個是我的書包。
My mother gives it to me in September.
九月開學的時候媽媽送給我。
It is blue and white, my favourite colours.
他是藍白色，是我最喜歡的顏色。
There are two big pockets and one small pocket.
他有兩個大口袋同一個小口袋。
I carry it to school every day.
我每天背着他上學。
I keep my books inside the big pocket.
我把書放在大口袋裡面。
My pencil case goes in the small pocket.
筆袋就放在小口袋裡。
I have a red pen, a green ruler and two pencils.
我有一支紅筆、一把綠尺同兩支鉛筆。
There is a bottle of water beside my books.
這些書旁邊還有一瓶水。
The bag is heavy on Mondays because I have many lessons.
每逢星期一書包特別重，因為我那一天課多。
Every Friday, I clean my school bag.
每個星期五，我都會清潔我的書包。
I take everything out and put the papers in the bin.
我會將所有東西拿出來，不要的紙就丟入垃圾桶。
Then I check my pencils and my eraser.
接着檢查鉛筆同擦膠。
My mother says a tidy bag helps me learn.
媽媽說整齊的書包幫我學習。
My school bag is my good helper.
我的書包是我的好幫手。
It carries my books and my pencils to school and back home.
他載着我的書同鉛筆，陪我上學放學。
I will take good care of it because it helps me every day.
我會好好愛惜他，因為他每天幫我。
1重點摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句號。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
寫。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句號。
串字。
文法。
檢查。
3逐步講解 Steps
- 今次範文範文題目是 My School Bag。英文題目用 title case：每個主要字都以大寫開頭，例如 My、School、Bag；短的介詞如 of、in 可以小寫。題目寫得清楚，讀者一眼就知道文章主題。易錯位：題目通常不加句號；寫作時先把題目抄在第一行，然後才開始第一段。
- 開段介紹開段三句做介紹：This is my school bag 指出主角；My mother gives it to me in September 說明來歷，in 加月份表示時間；It is blue and white, my favourite colours 描述顏色，my favourite colours 作補充說明。易錯位：gives 用第三人稱單數形式，因為主詞 my mother 是單數；介紹段不宜太長，三句已經足夠。
- 中段講小節中段寫細節：There are two big pockets and one small pocket 用 there are 帶出數量；I keep my books inside the big pocket 說明東西放在哪裡；My pencil case goes in the small pocket 用 goes 表示擺放的位置。two、one 是數量詞，big、small 是形容詞。易錯位：兩個或以上的口袋用 there are，只有一件東西才用 there is。
- 加習慣句Every Friday, I clean my school bag 寫出習慣：every Friday 放在句首，後面加逗號，主句用現在式表示每週都做。頻率片語放句首時必須加逗號；放在句尾時則不必。易錯位：clean 在這裡是動詞清洗，不是形容詞乾淨；習慣句最好放在小節之後、結尾之前，作為自然過渡。
- 收尾講感受結尾兩句講感受和打算：My school bag is my good helper 給書包一個身份；I will take good care of it 用 will 表示將來的打算，take care of 是照顧的意思。收尾句回應開頭的介紹，文章就完整了。易錯位：will 後面用原形動詞 take；it 代替 my school bag，避免名詞重複。
- 檢查清單交作文前用四項清單：一查大楷，包括句首、I 和題目；二查句號，每句結尾齊全；三查串字，難字逐個核對；四查文法，動詞形式和冠詞是否正確。逐項打勾，錯漏就無所遁形。易錯位：學生最常漏的是 I 的大寫和複數名詞的 s，檢查時要特別留意這兩處。
- 句式練習用同樣的四步結構寫 My Pencil Case：先介紹 This is my pencil case，再寫小節 It is blue and small，然後習慣句 Every Sunday, I clean it，最後感受句 It is my good helper。四句合成一篇小短文。易錯位：每步一句，先完成整篇草稿再檢查，不要寫一句改一句，以免打斷思路。
5例題示範 Example
寫〈My Pencil Case〉四步成文：照範文結構逐句寫，最後檢查格式。
- 介紹：This is my pencil case. 一句點出主角，短而清楚。
- 小節：It is blue and small. I keep a pen, a pencil and a ruler inside. 先說顏色大小，再說放什麼。
- 習慣：Every Sunday, I clean my pencil case. 頻率片語開頭，逗號之後寫主句。
- 感受：It is my good helper at school. 用比喻收尾，回應開頭的介紹。
- 檢查：題目大楷齊嗎？句號齊嗎？there are 和數量配對了嗎？
- 答案：This is my pencil case. It is blue and small. I keep a pen, a pencil and a ruler inside. Every Sunday, I clean my pencil case. It is my good helper at school.
6常見錯誤 Mistakes
75 題快測 Quick check
Q1書包哪個送？
Q2書包有多少個袋？
Q3書放邊？
Q4什麼時候清潔書包？
Q5填 in 或 on：___ September、___ Friday
8重點回顧 Recap
- 題目用 title case：My School Bag。
- 結構：介紹 → 小節 → 習慣 → 感受。
- There is 一樣 / There are 多樣。
- 句頭時間詞後加逗號：Every Friday, ...
- in + 月份、on + 日子。