Diary 日記
基礎大楷 + 句號。
- 抬頭：日子, 日期 - 天氣。
- because 帶出心情原因。
- after / in the afternoon / at night 排時間。
文體小知識：Write a diary entry.
§課文原文 Passage
1Saturday, 16 May - Sunny
2Today I wake up early because I am very excited. My mother takes me to the Central Library. The library is quiet and cool, and there are books everywhere. I borrow three storybooks about animals. My mother reads magazines and drinks tea there. We sit by the big window and read quietly.
3After the library, we eat noodles in a small restaurant. The noodles are delicious, and the soup is hot. In the afternoon, I write my reading diary at my desk. I draw a picture of a panda on the cover. I write the title on the first page too.
4Writing a diary helps me remember my happy days. My teacher says good writers write a little every day. At night, I read one more story about a brave little bird. Tomorrow I will tell my best friend about my new books. I think she will want to read them too!
§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Saturday, 16 May - Sunny
五月十六日（星期六）— 晴天（日記日期）
Today I wake up early because I am very excited.
今日我很早起床，因為太興奮。
My mother takes me to the Central Library.
媽媽帶我去中央圖書館。
The library is quiet and cool, and there are books everywhere.
圖書館又安靜又涼爽，周圍都是書。
I borrow three storybooks about animals.
我借了三本關於動物的故事書。
My mother reads magazines and drinks tea there.
媽媽在那裡看雜誌同喝茶。
We sit by the big window and read quietly.
我們坐在大窗旁邊靜靜地看書。
After the library, we eat noodles in a small restaurant.
離開圖書館之後，我們在一間小餐廳吃麵。
The noodles are delicious, and the soup is hot.
那些麵很好吃，湯又熱。
In the afternoon, I write my reading diary at my desk.
下午，我在書桌上寫閱讀日記。
I draw a picture of a panda on the cover.
我在封面畫了一隻熊貓。
I write the title on the first page too.
我還在第一頁寫了標題。
Writing a diary helps me remember my happy days.
寫日記幫我記住開心的日子。
My teacher says good writers write a little every day.
老師說好的作家每天都會寫一點。
At night, I read one more story about a brave little bird.
晚上，我多看一個關於勇敢小鳥的故事。
Tomorrow I will tell my best friend about my new books.
明天我會把新書的事告訴我最好的朋友。
I think she will want to read them too!
我想他都會想看！
1重點摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句號。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
寫。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句號。
串字。
文法。
檢查。
3逐步講解 Steps
- 抬頭格式日記第一行是抬頭：Saturday, 16 May - Sunny，日期、月份、天氣一行寫完。星期之後加逗號，日子用數字，月份以大寫開頭，最後用短橫連住天氣。小三的格式比低年級更完整，天氣也是內容的一部分。易錯位：月份無論在句中哪個位置都要大寫；日子用數字 16，不必寫成 sixteenth。
- 開頭帶心情第一句寫心情：Today I wake up early because I am very excited，因為興奮所以早醒，because 把結果和原因連起來。日記是記錄當天感受的文體，開頭交代心情，讀者立刻進入情境。易錯位：如果日記寫昨天的事，動詞要轉過去式，woke up、was excited；寫今天的事就用現在式 wake up。
- 地點小節寫出去的地方：My mother takes me to the Central Library，takes me to 表示帶我去；The library is quiet and cool, and there are books everywhere 用兩個形容詞描述環境，再用 there are 說明書多。寫地點先寫名字，再寫感覺。易錯位：Central Library 是專有名詞，兩個字都大寫；泛指圖書館才寫 the library。
- 活動次序一天裡的幾件事要按順序寫：先去圖書館，午餐吃 noodles，下午寫 reading diary，晚上再看多一個故事。時間詞 after、in the afternoon、at night 幫助排序，讀者一看就明白先後。易錯位：時間詞放在句首時，後面要加逗號；同一句寫兩件事才用 and 連接，不要把幾件事擠進一句。
- 引述名人句日記也可以引述他人的句子：My teacher says good writers write a little every day，老師說好的作者每天都寫一點。says 引出內容，之後的子句不加引號，這叫間接引述。易錯位：間接引述中動詞照現在式寫；如果要直接引述原句，才用引號，例如 My teacher says, "Write every day."
- 檢查四樣寫完日記檢查四樣：一查抬頭，日期、月份、天氣是否齊全；二查時態，寫今天用現在式，寫昨天全句轉過去式；三查大楷和句號，每句開頭結尾齊備；四查串字和文法。四樣全過，日記才算完成。易錯位：最常見的錯是全文時態混合，一半現在式一半過去式，動筆前先決定寫今天還是昨天。
- 今天寫一篇動手寫一篇：抬頭一行，心情開頭一句，中間三個活動各一句，最後一句總結感受，今晚就完成。日記貴在真實，寫自己真實的一天，句子自然有內容。易錯位：三個活動不必長，一句一個即可；總結句要回應開頭的心情，例如 It is a quiet and happy day。
5例題示範 Example
寫一篇圖書館日記：抬頭、心情、三個活動、總結，四步完成。
- 抬頭：Sunday, 17 May - Cloudy，星期之後加逗號，短橫之後寫天氣。
- 心情開頭：Today I wake up early because I am excited. because 連起早醒和興奮。
- 活動一：My father takes me to the library. takes me to 表示帶我去。
- 活動二：I read two story books about animals. two 之後用複數 books。
- 活動三：We eat noodles for lunch. for lunch 表示作為午餐。
- 總結：It is a quiet and happy day. 兩個形容詞用 and 連接，收束全文。
- 答案：Sunday, 17 May - Cloudy. Today I wake up early because I am excited. My father takes me to the library. I read two story books about animals. We eat noodles for lunch. It is a quiet and happy day.
6常見錯誤 Mistakes
75 題快測 Quick check
Q1日記那日天氣點？
Q2媽媽帶我去邊？
Q3圖書館是點的？
Q4老師說好的作家怎麼做？
Q5I am ___（excited / exciting）？
8重點回顧 Recap
- 抬頭：日子, 日期 - 天氣。
- because 帶出心情原因。
- after / in the afternoon / at night 排時間。
- excited 講人，exciting 講東西。
- 日記尾加一句總結感受。