Sentence Writing 写句子
基础大楷 + 句号。
- 题目用 title case：My School Bag。
- 结构：介绍 → 小节 → 习惯 → 感受。
- There is 一样 / There are 多样。
文体小知识：Write simple sentences.
§课文原文 Passage
1My School Bag
2This is my school bag. My mother gives it to me in September. It is blue and white, my favourite colours. There are two big pockets and one small pocket. I carry it to school every day.
3I keep my books inside the big pocket. My pencil case goes in the small pocket. I have a red pen, a green ruler and two pencils. There is a bottle of water beside my books. The bag is heavy on Mondays because I have many lessons.
4Every Friday, I clean my school bag. I take everything out and put the papers in the bin. Then I check my pencils and my eraser. My mother says a tidy bag helps me learn.
5My school bag is my good helper. It carries my books and my pencils to school and back home. I will take good care of it because it helps me every day.
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
My School Bag
我的书包（标题）
This is my school bag.
这个是我的书包。
My mother gives it to me in September.
九月开学的时候妈妈送给我。
It is blue and white, my favourite colours.
他是蓝白色，是我最喜欢的颜色。
There are two big pockets and one small pocket.
他有两个大口袋同一个小口袋。
I carry it to school every day.
我每天背着他上学。
I keep my books inside the big pocket.
我把书放在大口袋里面。
My pencil case goes in the small pocket.
笔袋就放在小口袋里。
I have a red pen, a green ruler and two pencils.
我有一支红笔、一把绿尺同两支铅笔。
There is a bottle of water beside my books.
这些书旁边还有一瓶水。
The bag is heavy on Mondays because I have many lessons.
每逢星期一书包特别重，因为我那一天课多。
Every Friday, I clean my school bag.
每个星期五，我都会清洁我的书包。
I take everything out and put the papers in the bin.
我会将所有东西拿出来，不要的纸就丢入垃圾桶。
Then I check my pencils and my eraser.
接着检查铅笔同擦胶。
My mother says a tidy bag helps me learn.
妈妈说整齐的书包帮我学习。
My school bag is my good helper.
我的书包是我的好帮手。
It carries my books and my pencils to school and back home.
他载着我的书同铅笔，陪我上学放学。
I will take good care of it because it helps me every day.
我会好好爱惜他，因为他每天帮我。
1重点摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句号。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
写。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句号。
串字。
文法。
检查。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 今次范文范文题目是 My School Bag。英文题目用 title case：每个主要字都以大写开头，例如 My、School、Bag；短的介词如 of、in 可以小写。题目写得清楚，读者一眼就知道文章主题。易错位：题目通常不加句号；写作时先把题目抄在第一行，然后才开始第一段。
- 开段介绍开段三句做介绍：This is my school bag 指出主角；My mother gives it to me in September 说明来历，in 加月份表示时间；It is blue and white, my favourite colours 描述颜色，my favourite colours 作补充说明。易错位：gives 用第三人称单数形式，因为主词 my mother 是单数；介绍段不宜太长，三句已经足够。
- 中段讲小节中段写细节：There are two big pockets and one small pocket 用 there are 带出数量；I keep my books inside the big pocket 说明东西放在哪里；My pencil case goes in the small pocket 用 goes 表示摆放的位置。two、one 是数量词，big、small 是形容词。易错位：两个或以上的口袋用 there are，只有一件东西才用 there is。
- 加习惯句Every Friday, I clean my school bag 写出习惯：every Friday 放在句首，后面加逗号，主句用现在式表示每周都做。频率片语放句首时必须加逗号；放在句尾时则不必。易错位：clean 在这里是动词清洗，不是形容词干净；习惯句最好放在小节之后、结尾之前，作为自然过渡。
- 收尾讲感受结尾两句讲感受和打算：My school bag is my good helper 给书包一个身份；I will take good care of it 用 will 表示将来的打算，take care of 是照顾的意思。收尾句回应开头的介绍，文章就完整了。易错位：will 后面用原形动词 take；it 代替 my school bag，避免名词重复。
- 检查清单交作文前用四项清单：一查大楷，包括句首、I 和题目；二查句号，每句结尾齐全；三查串字，难字逐个核对；四查文法，动词形式和冠词是否正确。逐项打勾，错漏就无所遁形。易错位：学生最常漏的是 I 的大写和复数名词的 s，检查时要特别留意这两处。
- 句式练习用同样的四步结构写 My Pencil Case：先介绍 This is my pencil case，再写小节 It is blue and small，然后习惯句 Every Sunday, I clean it，最后感受句 It is my good helper。四句合成一篇小短文。易错位：每步一句，先完成整篇草稿再检查，不要写一句改一句，以免打断思路。
5例题示范 Example
写〈My Pencil Case〉四步成文：照范文结构逐句写，最后检查格式。
- 介绍：This is my pencil case. 一句点出主角，短而清楚。
- 小节：It is blue and small. I keep a pen, a pencil and a ruler inside. 先说颜色大小，再说放什么。
- 习惯：Every Sunday, I clean my pencil case. 频率片语开头，逗号之后写主句。
- 感受：It is my good helper at school. 用比喻收尾，回应开头的介绍。
- 检查：题目大楷齐吗？句号齐吗？there are 和数量配对了吗？
- 答案：This is my pencil case. It is blue and small. I keep a pen, a pencil and a ruler inside. Every Sunday, I clean my pencil case. It is my good helper at school.
6常见错误 Mistakes
75 题快测 Quick check
Q1书包哪个送？
Q2书包有多少个袋？
Q3书放边？
Q4什么时候清洁书包？
Q5填 in 或 on：___ September、___ Friday
8重点回顾 Recap
- 题目用 title case：My School Bag。
- 结构：介绍 → 小节 → 习惯 → 感受。
- There is 一样 / There are 多样。
- 句头时间词后加逗号：Every Friday, ...
- in + 月份、on + 日子。