Paragraph Writing 寫段落
基礎大楷 + 句號。
- 四段結構：開頭 → 玩法 → 下午 → 感受。
- 最高級寫作好用：flies the highest。
- look forward to + 名詞/ing。
文體小知識：Write a short paragraph.
§課文原文 Passage
1Our School Picnic
2Every autumn, our class has a school picnic. This year we go to a big park in Tai Po. I always look forward to this happy day.
3The weather is sunny and cool. We play ball games and fly kites on the grass. My friends share sandwiches and juice under a tree. Ken's kite flies the highest, and we all clap for him. After lunch, we take photos near the lake.
4In the afternoon, my teacher plays games with us too. We sing songs and tell funny stories on the grass. At three o'clock, we clean up the rubbish together. We put the bottles and papers into three bags. The park looks clean and beautiful again.
5The bus ride home is quiet because everyone is tired. Still, we all smile on our seats. I love our school picnic because we learn and play together. I cannot wait for next year's picnic!
§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Our School Picnic
我們的學校旅行（標題）
Every autumn, our class has a school picnic.
每年秋天，我們班都會去學校旅行。
This year we go to a big park in Tai Po.
今年我們去大埔一個大公園。
I always look forward to this happy day.
我一直都好期待這個開心的日子。
The weather is sunny and cool.
天氣晴朗又涼爽。
We play ball games and fly kites on the grass.
我們在草地上玩球類遊戲同放風箏。
My friends share sandwiches and juice under a tree.
朋友們在樹下面分享三文治同果汁。
Ken's kite flies the highest, and we all clap for him.
Ken 的風箏飛得最高，我們全部人都拍手。
After lunch, we take photos near the lake.
吃完午餐，我們在湖邊拍照。
In the afternoon, my teacher plays games with us too.
下午，老師都同我們一起玩遊戲。
We sing songs and tell funny stories on the grass.
我們在草地上唱歌同講笑話。
At three o'clock, we clean up the rubbish together.
三點鐘，我們一起收拾垃圾。
We put the bottles and papers into three bags.
我們把瓶子同紙分別放進三個袋子。
The park looks clean and beautiful again.
公園又變得乾淨又漂亮。
The bus ride home is quiet because everyone is tired.
回程的巴士很安靜，因為個個都很累。
Still, we all smile on our seats.
不過我們坐在座位上都還在笑。
I love our school picnic because we learn and play together.
我好喜歡學校旅行，因為我們一起學習一起玩。
I cannot wait for next year's picnic!
我真是等不及明年的旅行！
1重點摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句號。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
寫。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句號。
串字。
文法。
檢查。
3逐步講解 Steps
- 範文結構範文 Our School Picnic 分四段：第一段開頭，交代時間和地點；第二段寫玩法；第三段寫下午活動；第四段用感受收尾。一段只寫一個焦點，每段另起新行。易錯位：學生常把所有內容擠成一段，記住焦點一換就換段，每段首行的縮排或頂格格式要跟足。
- 開頭段開頭段三句：Every autumn, our class has a school picnic 交代時間和事件；This year we go to a big park in Tai Po 交代地點；I always look forward to this happy day 表達期待。易錯位：look forward to 的 to 是介詞，後面跟名詞或 ing 動詞，例如 look forward to seeing you；不能把它當成普通的不定式 to。
- 中段加小節中段寫細節：The weather is sunny and cool 描述天氣；We play ball games and fly kites 寫兩項活動，用 and 連接；My friends share sandwiches and juice under a tree 再加上地點 under a tree。主詞 we、my friends 都是複數，動詞用原形。易錯位：fly kites 的 kites 用複數更自然，因為風箏通常不止一隻。
- 最高級加分Ken's kite flies the highest 表示 Ken 的風箏飛得最高，the 加 est 的最高級用於三者以上的比較。寫活動文章時加一句最高級，描寫立刻生動，例如 the loudest cheer、the funniest game。易錯位：最高級前面必須有 the；flies 加 s，因為主詞 Ken's kite 是第三人稱單數。
- 尾段感受結尾句 I love our school picnic because we learn and play together 用 because 帶出原因：喜歡什麼、因為什麼，一句連起，收尾有力。易錯位：because 之後必須是完整子句，要有主詞 we 和動詞 learn and play；只寫 because happy 就不完整，而且原因要與前文呼應，不要突然轉題。
- 格式檢查格式三查：一查段落，每段另起新行，首行縮排；二查大楷和句號，每句開頭大寫、結尾有句號；三查串字和文法，逐句讀一次，確認動詞形式正確。三項全部過關才可以交卷。易錯位：段落之間忘記換行是最常見的格式錯，抄寫時提醒自己：一個焦點寫完，立即換段。
- 句式練習用同樣的四段結構寫 Our Sports Day：第一段交代時間地點，第二段寫比賽，第三段寫下午活動，第四段寫感受。每段先寫一句主題句，再加一兩句細節，完成兩段後檢查一次格式。易錯位：不要一開始就追求長句，先把四個焦點各自寫清楚，段落自然成形。
5例題示範 Example
寫〈Our Sports Day〉開頭兩段：照四段結構先完成前半，再檢查格式。
- 開頭：Every autumn, our school has a Sports Day. This year it is in October. 先交代時間和事件。
- 加期待：I always look forward to the races. look forward to 後面接名詞 the races。
- 中段：The weather is sunny. I run in the race and my team wins a red star. 先寫天氣，再寫活動。
- 最高級：Ben runs the fastest in our class. the 加 est，in our class 劃定範圍。
- 檢查：段落是否分明？每句的大楷和句號齊嗎？
- 答案：Every autumn, our school has a Sports Day. This year it is in October. I always look forward to the races. The weather is sunny. I run in the race and my team wins a red star. Ben runs the fastest in our class.
6常見錯誤 Mistakes
75 題快測 Quick check
Q1今年 picnic 去邊？
Q2哪個的風箏飛得最高？
Q3朋友在樹下做什麼？
Q4三點鐘做什麼？
Q5為什麼喜歡 picnic？
8重點回顧 Recap
- 四段結構：開頭 → 玩法 → 下午 → 感受。
- 最高級寫作好用：flies the highest。
- look forward to + 名詞/ing。
- because 收尾帶原因。
- 寫完逐段檢查大楷句號。