Picture Composition 看图写作
进阶先看完所有图，再将图串成一个故事：次序字＋小节＋感受，最后加标题。
- 看图写作四步：看完图 → 计故事 → 次序字连接 → 加标题
- 开场用 past continuous 设定背景：Ken was playing football in the park.
- 次序字：Suddenly、First、Then、Finally——每格图都要出现
文体小知识：Turn pictures into a story.
§课文原文 Passage
1Ken's Brave Day
2Last Saturday afternoon, Ken was playing football in the park with his friends. The sun was warm, and the boys were laughing loudly. Ken kicked the ball too hard, and it flew over the fence into the river nearby. At that moment, a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water. Its owner, an old lady, was resting on a bench nearby.
3The dog's owner cried for help, and Ken did not think twice. He took off his shoes and swam towards the dog quickly. The water was colder than he expected, and the current was strong. First he caught the dog gently, and then he pushed the ball back to the bank with his foot. Two of his friends pulled them out with a long branch. The old lady thanked Ken again and again, but his new shoes were covered in mud.
4Ken's friends laughed, yet he only smiled because he had saved a life. The old lady bought him a bottle of orange juice, and the dog licked his hand all the way home. Sometimes a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes. His mother washed the shoes that evening, but the story stayed in his heart for much longer.
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Ken's Brave Day
Ken 勇敢的一天
Last Saturday afternoon, Ken was playing football in the park with his friends.
上星期六下午，Ken 和朋友在公园踢足球。
The sun was warm, and the boys were laughing loudly.
阳光暖洋洋，男孩们笑声不绝。
Ken kicked the ball too hard, and it flew over the fence into the river nearby.
Ken 一脚踢得太用力，球飞过栏杆掉进附近的一条河。
At that moment, a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water.
就在那时，一只小狗追著那球，噗通一声跳进了水里。
Its owner, an old lady, was resting on a bench nearby.
牠主人是位婆婆，本来在附近的长椅上休息。
The dog's owner cried for help, and Ken did not think twice.
婆婆大声喊救命，Ken 想都没有想。
He took off his shoes and swam towards the dog quickly.
他脱下鞋子，很快地游向那只狗。
The water was colder than he expected, and the current was strong.
水比他想像中冷，水流又急。
First he caught the dog gently, and then he pushed the ball back to the bank with his foot.
他先轻轻捉住那只狗，再用脚将球推回岸边。
Two of his friends pulled them out with a long branch.
他的两个朋友用一条长树枝将他们拉了上来。
The old lady thanked Ken again and again, but his new shoes were covered in mud.
婆婆不停地多谢 Ken，但他的新鞋已经沾满泥浆。
Ken's friends laughed, yet he only smiled because he had saved a life.
朋友们都笑他，但他只是笑笑，因为他救了一条生命。
The old lady bought him a bottle of orange juice, and the dog licked his hand all the way home.
婆婆买了一支橙汁给他，只狗还一路舔著他的手直到回家。
Sometimes a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes.
有时一个小举动，比一对新鞋更有价值。
His mother washed the shoes that evening, but the story stayed in his heart for much longer.
那晚妈妈帮他把鞋洗干净，但这件事在他心里留下了更久。
1重点摘要 Summary
先看完所有图，再将图串成一个故事：次序字＋小节＋感受，最后加标题。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
照片或图画。
说出所见。
First, next, then。
地点和时间。
故事中的人物。
人物做的动作。
人物的感受。
怎样收结。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 看图逐格看：哪个（Ken 和朋友）、哪里（park）、正在做什么（playing football）、还有什么（a small dog、an old lady on a bench）——人物背景先入脑。
- 次序Suddenly / First / Then / Finally 串起每格：Suddenly, a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water. First he caught the dog gently, and then he pushed the ball back.
- 感受人物心情令故事立体：The old lady thanked Ken again and again… he only smiled because he had saved a life.心情写在结尾一幕：he only smiled——动作收结，文字最少，余味最长。
- 计故事估前因后果：ball 飞过 fence 落河 → 狗接著跳进水里 → 老婆婆喊救命 → Ken 下水救人。四格图 = 四段情节。图与图之间加想像：为什么狗会追波？可能是球先弹过栏杆——合理补白令四格变一个完整故事。
- past continuous 开场开场用过去进行式画背景：Ken was playing football in the park with his friends. The sun was warm.背景天气都服务剧情：The sun was warm 对比后面 The water was colder——先甜后苦，高潮更紧张。
- 困难位高潮要有阻滞：The water was colder than he expected, and the current was strong. Two of his friends pulled them out with a long branch.
- 标题教训标题 Ken's Brave Day 点明主旨；结尾讲道理：Sometimes a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes.教训不要说教：用一句意象收——a small act is worth more than new shoes，道理藏在画面里。
4图解 Diagrams
5例题示范 Example
任务：三格图——(1) Ken 在公园踢球 (2) 球和小狗掉进了河里 (3) Ken 救回小狗。用次序字写成一段故事。
- 第一步：先看完所有图，计好 who / where / what——Ken、the park、救狗。
- 第二步：第一格用 past continuous 开场——Ken was playing football in the park.
- 第三步：用次序字串连每格——Suddenly / First / Then / Finally，每格都要出现。
- 第四步：加感受小节——The water was colder than he expected… he only smiled.
- 第五步：最后加标题（例如 Ken's Brave Day）同一句点题感想。
- 答案：Last Saturday afternoon, Ken was playing football in the park with his friends. Suddenly, he kicked the ball too hard and it flew over the fence into the river. Then a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water. Without thinking, Ken took off his shoes and swam towards the dog. First he caught the dog gently, and then his friends pulled them out with a long branch. The old lady thanked Ken again and again. His new shoes were covered in mud, but he only smiled because he had saved a life.
6常见错误 Mistakes
75 题快测 Quick check
Q1What is picture composition?
Q2What tells the order?
Q3What is setting?
Q4What is action?
Q5What is feeling?
8重点回顾 Recap
- 看图写作四步：看完图 → 计故事 → 次序字连接 → 加标题
- 开场用 past continuous 设定背景：Ken was playing football in the park.
- 次序字：Suddenly、First、Then、Finally——每格图都要出现
- 加细节同心情：The water was colder than he expected.
- 结尾加一句教训点题：a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes