Short Presentations 短讲汇报

进阶

结构要清楚,用 cue card 练习,讲的时候有眼神接触、声线肯定——不要照稿读。

适合:中一英国语文 · 单元:说话与聆听 · 建议学习路径第 21/21 课

学完呢课,你会识:
  • 短讲结构:Greeting → Topic → 3 points → In conclusion → Thank you
  • 开场预告结构:First… then… and finally…——听众容易跟
  • 每个重点讲两三句,加例子(Sham Shui Po)和感受
文体:Speaking有声朗读

文体小知识:Plan, practise, make eye contact.

英国语文English Language
读呢课前,你应该识: Listening for Key Information 聆听要点

§课文原文 Passage

1'Good afternoon, everyone.' 'My name is Amy, and today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.' 'First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips for beginners.'

2'I started taking photos two years ago with my mother's old camera.' 'Every weekend, I visit a different district and take pictures of streets, buildings and people.' 'Sham Shui Po is my favourite place, because the old shops and the new cafes stand side by side.' 'My favourite photo shows an old man feeding birds at sunrise, and the golden light made everything soft.' 'Photography has taught me to look at the world more carefully.' 'Before this hobby, I walked past the same streets every day without seeing anything.' 'Now I notice the colours of the doors, the smiles of the shopkeepers and the shapes of the clouds.' 'I have also made friends in the Photography Club, and we share our photos every Friday.'

3'If you want to try this hobby, you only need a phone.' 'Start with things you love, keep your hands steady and take hundreds of photos.' 'In conclusion, photography is fun, cheap and creative.' 'Thank you for listening.' 'Does anyone have a question?'

§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation

'Good afternoon, everyone.'

「各位午安。」

'My name is Amy, and today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.'

「我叫美欣,今天想同大家说一说我最喜欢的嗜好——摄影。」

'First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips for beginners.'

「我会先说一说我怎样开始,然后分享我学到些什么,最后给初学者一些贴士。」

'I started taking photos two years ago with my mother's old camera.'

「我两年前用妈妈的旧相机开始拍照。」

'Every weekend, I visit a different district and take pictures of streets, buildings and people.'

「每个周末我都会去不同的地区,拍些街道、建筑同人物。」

'Sham Shui Po is my favourite place, because the old shops and the new cafes stand side by side.'

「深水埗是我最喜欢的地方,因为旧店同新咖啡店并排而立。」

'My favourite photo shows an old man feeding birds at sunrise, and the golden light made everything soft.'

「我最喜欢那张相,是一位伯伯在日出时分喂鸟,那些金光令所有东西都变得很柔和。」

'Photography has taught me to look at the world more carefully.'

「摄影教会我要更细心地看这个世界。」

'Before this hobby, I walked past the same streets every day without seeing anything.'

「未开始这个嗜好之前,我每日走过同样的街道,但什么都看不到。」

'Now I notice the colours of the doors, the smiles of the shopkeepers and the shapes of the clouds.'

「现在我会留意到门的颜色、店主的笑容同云的形状。」

'I have also made friends in the Photography Club, and we share our photos every Friday.'

「我还在摄影学会认识到朋友,我们逢星期五都会分享大家的作品。」

'If you want to try this hobby, you only need a phone.'

「如果你想试一试这个嗜好,只要有一部电话就够了。」

'Start with things you love, keep your hands steady and take hundreds of photos.'

「由你喜欢的东西开始拍,手要稳,还要拍几百张相。」

'In conclusion, photography is fun, cheap and creative.'

「总结来说,摄影好玩、便宜又有创意。」

'Thank you for listening.'

「多谢大家聆听。」

'Does anyone have a question?'

「有没有人想发问?」

1重点摘要 Summary

结构要清楚,用 cue card 练习,讲的时候有眼神接触、声线肯定——不要照稿读。

2生字卡 Vocabulary

P
Presentation演讲

向全班演讲。

A
Audience观众

在听的人。

S
Slide投影片

视觉辅助工具。

I
Introduction开场

演讲的开始。

C
Conclusion结尾

演讲的结尾。

E
Eye contact眼神交流

看著听众。

V
Voice声音

说话清楚。

C
Confidence自信

相信自己。

3逐步讲解 Steps

  1. 开场打招呼+自我介绍+讲主题:'Good afternoon, everyone. My name is Amy, and today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.'
  2. 主体一点一段:为什么开始(two years ago, my mother's old camera)→ 学到什么(look at the world more carefully)→ tips(you only need a phone)。
  3. 结尾In conclusion 总结+多谢:photography is fun, cheap and creative. Thank you for listening.结尾三件事:总结要点 → 个人呼吁 → 多谢听众——缺一样都算未完。
  4. 预告结构告诉给听众知你讲什么:'First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips for beginners.'——First / then / finally 是路标。
  5. 例子感受每个重点配具体例子:Sham Shui Po is my favourite place, because the old shops and the new cafes stand side by side. My favourite photo shows an old man feeding birds at sunrise.
  6. 开放问题收尾邀请互动:Does anyone have a question?——讲完不要立刻走回讲台。站定等问题:don't rush off——问题是加分位,答不到都讲 That is an interesting question.
  7. 练习贴士Cue card 只写 keyword,不要照稿读;事前练三次;eye contact 要看不同角落的同学;音量要够大。练习用电话录音:听返自己嗓音,最快捉到太快、太低声,还有 er… um… 这类填充字。

4图解 Diagrams

课题概念图Short Presentations 短讲汇报1开场重点 Focus详细内容见下方2主体重点 Focus详细内容见下方3结尾重点 Focus详细内容见下方核心词语演讲 Presentati… · 观众 Audience · 投影片 Slide · 开场 Introducti…
课题概念图 · 中英对照 bilingual

5例题示范 Example

任务:准备一分钟短讲 My Favourite Hobby,跟 Greeting → Topic → 三个重点 → 结尾 的结构写讲稿。

  1. 第一步:Greeting + 讲明题目——Good afternoon, everyone. Today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.
  2. 第二步:预告结构,听众易跟——First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips.
  3. 第三步:主体三个重点,每个两三句——点开始(two years ago, my mother's old camera)、学到什么(look at the world more carefully)、新手贴士(you only need a phone)。
  4. 第四步:用 In conclusion 总结——photography is fun, cheap and creative.
  5. 第五步:有礼收结——Thank you for listening. Does anyone have a question? 练习时记住眼神接触、不要照稿读。
  6. 答案:Good afternoon, everyone. Today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography. I started two years ago with my mother's old camera, and now I visit a different district every weekend. Photography has taught me to look at the world more carefully — I notice colours, smiles and the shapes of clouds now. If you want to try, you only need a phone: start with things you love and keep your hands steady. In conclusion, photography is fun, cheap and creative. Thank you for listening. Does anyone have a question?

6常见错误 Mistakes

✗ 照稿读
✓ 用提示卡
✗ 不望观众
✓ eye contact
✗ 太快
✓ 放慢
✗ 没有结尾
✓ Thank you.

75 题快测 Quick check

Q1What is a presentation?

Q2Who is the audience?

Q3What is a visual aid?

Q4What is eye contact?

Q5How should you speak?

8重点回顾 Recap

  • 短讲结构:Greeting → Topic → 3 points → In conclusion → Thank you
  • 开场预告结构:First… then… and finally…——听众容易跟
  • 每个重点讲两三句,加例子(Sham Shui Po)和感受
  • Cue card 只写 keyword,事前练习三次以上
  • 眼神接触、音量够大、不要照稿读;收尾开放问题:Does anyone have a question?

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