Picture Composition 看圖寫作
進階先看完所有圖，再將圖串成一個故事：次序字＋小節＋感受，最後加標題。
- 看圖寫作四步：看完圖 → 計故事 → 次序字連接 → 加標題
- 開場用 past continuous 設定背景：Ken was playing football in the park.
- 次序字：Suddenly、First、Then、Finally——每格圖都要出現
文體小知識：Turn pictures into a story.
§課文原文 Passage
1Ken's Brave Day
2Last Saturday afternoon, Ken was playing football in the park with his friends. The sun was warm, and the boys were laughing loudly. Ken kicked the ball too hard, and it flew over the fence into the river nearby. At that moment, a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water. Its owner, an old lady, was resting on a bench nearby.
3The dog's owner cried for help, and Ken did not think twice. He took off his shoes and swam towards the dog quickly. The water was colder than he expected, and the current was strong. First he caught the dog gently, and then he pushed the ball back to the bank with his foot. Two of his friends pulled them out with a long branch. The old lady thanked Ken again and again, but his new shoes were covered in mud.
4Ken's friends laughed, yet he only smiled because he had saved a life. The old lady bought him a bottle of orange juice, and the dog licked his hand all the way home. Sometimes a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes. His mother washed the shoes that evening, but the story stayed in his heart for much longer.
§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Ken's Brave Day
Ken 勇敢的一天
Last Saturday afternoon, Ken was playing football in the park with his friends.
上星期六下午，Ken 和朋友在公園踢足球。
The sun was warm, and the boys were laughing loudly.
陽光暖洋洋，男孩們笑聲不絕。
Ken kicked the ball too hard, and it flew over the fence into the river nearby.
Ken 一腳踢得太用力，球飛過欄杆掉進附近的一條河。
At that moment, a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water.
就在那時，一隻小狗追著那球，噗通一聲跳進了水裡。
Its owner, an old lady, was resting on a bench nearby.
牠主人是位婆婆，本來在附近的長椅上休息。
The dog's owner cried for help, and Ken did not think twice.
婆婆大聲喊救命，Ken 想都沒有想。
He took off his shoes and swam towards the dog quickly.
他脫下鞋子，很快地游向那隻狗。
The water was colder than he expected, and the current was strong.
水比他想像中冷，水流又急。
First he caught the dog gently, and then he pushed the ball back to the bank with his foot.
他先輕輕捉住那隻狗，再用腳將球推回岸邊。
Two of his friends pulled them out with a long branch.
他的兩個朋友用一條長樹枝將他們拉了上來。
The old lady thanked Ken again and again, but his new shoes were covered in mud.
婆婆不停地多謝 Ken，但他的新鞋已經沾滿泥漿。
Ken's friends laughed, yet he only smiled because he had saved a life.
朋友們都笑他，但他只是笑笑，因為他救了一條生命。
The old lady bought him a bottle of orange juice, and the dog licked his hand all the way home.
婆婆買了一支橙汁給他，隻狗還一路舔著他的手直到回家。
Sometimes a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes.
有時一個小舉動，比一對新鞋更有價值。
His mother washed the shoes that evening, but the story stayed in his heart for much longer.
那晚媽媽幫他把鞋洗乾淨，但這件事在他心裡留下了更久。
1重點摘要 Summary
先看完所有圖，再將圖串成一個故事：次序字＋小節＋感受，最後加標題。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
照片或圖畫。
說出所見。
First, next, then。
地點和時間。
故事中的人物。
人物做的動作。
人物的感受。
怎樣收結。
3逐步講解 Steps
- 看圖逐格看：哪個（Ken 和朋友）、哪裡（park）、正在做什麼（playing football）、還有什麼（a small dog、an old lady on a bench）——人物背景先入腦。
- 次序Suddenly / First / Then / Finally 串起每格：Suddenly, a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water. First he caught the dog gently, and then he pushed the ball back.
- 感受人物心情令故事立體：The old lady thanked Ken again and again… he only smiled because he had saved a life.心情寫在結尾一幕：he only smiled——動作收結，文字最少，餘味最長。
- 計故事估前因後果：ball 飛過 fence 落河 → 狗接著跳進水裡 → 老婆婆喊救命 → Ken 下水救人。四格圖 = 四段情節。圖與圖之間加想像：為什麼狗會追波？可能是球先彈過欄杆——合理補白令四格變一個完整故事。
- past continuous 開場開場用過去進行式畫背景：Ken was playing football in the park with his friends. The sun was warm.背景天氣都服務劇情：The sun was warm 對比後面 The water was colder——先甜後苦，高潮更緊張。
- 困難位高潮要有阻滯：The water was colder than he expected, and the current was strong. Two of his friends pulled them out with a long branch.
- 標題教訓標題 Ken's Brave Day 點明主旨；結尾講道理：Sometimes a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes.教訓不要說教：用一句意象收——a small act is worth more than new shoes，道理藏在畫面裡。
4圖解 Diagrams
5例題示範 Example
任務：三格圖——(1) Ken 在公園踢球 (2) 球和小狗掉進了河裡 (3) Ken 救回小狗。用次序字寫成一段故事。
- 第一步：先看完所有圖，計好 who / where / what——Ken、the park、救狗。
- 第二步：第一格用 past continuous 開場——Ken was playing football in the park.
- 第三步：用次序字串連每格——Suddenly / First / Then / Finally，每格都要出現。
- 第四步：加感受小節——The water was colder than he expected… he only smiled.
- 第五步：最後加標題（例如 Ken's Brave Day）同一句點題感想。
- 答案：Last Saturday afternoon, Ken was playing football in the park with his friends. Suddenly, he kicked the ball too hard and it flew over the fence into the river. Then a small dog ran after the ball and jumped into the water. Without thinking, Ken took off his shoes and swam towards the dog. First he caught the dog gently, and then his friends pulled them out with a long branch. The old lady thanked Ken again and again. His new shoes were covered in mud, but he only smiled because he had saved a life.
6常見錯誤 Mistakes
75 題快測 Quick check
Q1What is picture composition?
Q2What tells the order?
Q3What is setting?
Q4What is action?
Q5What is feeling?
8重點回顧 Recap
- 看圖寫作四步：看完圖 → 計故事 → 次序字連接 → 加標題
- 開場用 past continuous 設定背景：Ken was playing football in the park.
- 次序字：Suddenly、First、Then、Finally——每格圖都要出現
- 加細節同心情：The water was colder than he expected.
- 結尾加一句教訓點題：a small act is worth more than a pair of new shoes