Short Presentations 短講匯報

進階

結構要清楚,用 cue card 練習,講的時候有眼神接觸、聲線肯定——不要照稿讀。

適合:中一英國語文 · 單元:說話與聆聽 · 建議學習路徑第 21/21 課

學完呢課,你會識:
  • 短講結構:Greeting → Topic → 3 points → In conclusion → Thank you
  • 開場預告結構:First… then… and finally…——聽眾容易跟
  • 每個重點講兩三句,加例子(Sham Shui Po)和感受
文體:Speaking有聲朗讀

文體小知識:Plan, practise, make eye contact.

英國語文English Language
讀呢課前,你應該識: Listening for Key Information 聆聽要點

§課文原文 Passage

1'Good afternoon, everyone.' 'My name is Amy, and today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.' 'First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips for beginners.'

2'I started taking photos two years ago with my mother's old camera.' 'Every weekend, I visit a different district and take pictures of streets, buildings and people.' 'Sham Shui Po is my favourite place, because the old shops and the new cafes stand side by side.' 'My favourite photo shows an old man feeding birds at sunrise, and the golden light made everything soft.' 'Photography has taught me to look at the world more carefully.' 'Before this hobby, I walked past the same streets every day without seeing anything.' 'Now I notice the colours of the doors, the smiles of the shopkeepers and the shapes of the clouds.' 'I have also made friends in the Photography Club, and we share our photos every Friday.'

3'If you want to try this hobby, you only need a phone.' 'Start with things you love, keep your hands steady and take hundreds of photos.' 'In conclusion, photography is fun, cheap and creative.' 'Thank you for listening.' 'Does anyone have a question?'

§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation

'Good afternoon, everyone.'

「各位午安。」

'My name is Amy, and today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.'

「我叫美欣,今天想同大家說一說我最喜歡的嗜好——攝影。」

'First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips for beginners.'

「我會先說一說我怎樣開始,然後分享我學到些什麼,最後給初學者一些貼士。」

'I started taking photos two years ago with my mother's old camera.'

「我兩年前用媽媽的舊相機開始拍照。」

'Every weekend, I visit a different district and take pictures of streets, buildings and people.'

「每個週末我都會去不同的地區,拍些街道、建築同人物。」

'Sham Shui Po is my favourite place, because the old shops and the new cafes stand side by side.'

「深水埗是我最喜歡的地方,因為舊店同新咖啡店並排而立。」

'My favourite photo shows an old man feeding birds at sunrise, and the golden light made everything soft.'

「我最喜歡那張相,是一位伯伯在日出時分餵鳥,那些金光令所有東西都變得很柔和。」

'Photography has taught me to look at the world more carefully.'

「攝影教會我要更細心地看這個世界。」

'Before this hobby, I walked past the same streets every day without seeing anything.'

「未開始這個嗜好之前,我每日走過同樣的街道,但什麼都看不到。」

'Now I notice the colours of the doors, the smiles of the shopkeepers and the shapes of the clouds.'

「現在我會留意到門的顏色、店主的笑容同雲的形狀。」

'I have also made friends in the Photography Club, and we share our photos every Friday.'

「我還在攝影學會認識到朋友,我們逢星期五都會分享大家的作品。」

'If you want to try this hobby, you only need a phone.'

「如果你想試一試這個嗜好,只要有一部電話就夠了。」

'Start with things you love, keep your hands steady and take hundreds of photos.'

「由你喜歡的東西開始拍,手要穩,還要拍幾百張相。」

'In conclusion, photography is fun, cheap and creative.'

「總結來說,攝影好玩、便宜又有創意。」

'Thank you for listening.'

「多謝大家聆聽。」

'Does anyone have a question?'

「有沒有人想發問?」

1重點摘要 Summary

結構要清楚,用 cue card 練習,講的時候有眼神接觸、聲線肯定——不要照稿讀。

2生字卡 Vocabulary

P
Presentation演講

向全班演講。

A
Audience觀眾

在聽的人。

S
Slide投影片

視覺輔助工具。

I
Introduction開場

演講的開始。

C
Conclusion結尾

演講的結尾。

E
Eye contact眼神交流

看著聽眾。

V
Voice聲音

說話清楚。

C
Confidence自信

相信自己。

3逐步講解 Steps

  1. 開場打招呼+自我介紹+講主題:'Good afternoon, everyone. My name is Amy, and today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.'
  2. 主體一點一段:為什麼開始(two years ago, my mother's old camera)→ 學到什麼(look at the world more carefully)→ tips(you only need a phone)。
  3. 結尾In conclusion 總結+多謝:photography is fun, cheap and creative. Thank you for listening.結尾三件事:總結要點 → 個人呼籲 → 多謝聽眾——缺一樣都算未完。
  4. 預告結構告訴給聽眾知你講什麼:'First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips for beginners.'——First / then / finally 是路標。
  5. 例子感受每個重點配具體例子:Sham Shui Po is my favourite place, because the old shops and the new cafes stand side by side. My favourite photo shows an old man feeding birds at sunrise.
  6. 開放問題收尾邀請互動:Does anyone have a question?——講完不要立刻走回講台。站定等問題:don't rush off——問題是加分位,答不到都講 That is an interesting question.
  7. 練習貼士Cue card 只寫 keyword,不要照稿讀;事前練三次;eye contact 要看不同角落的同學;音量要夠大。練習用電話錄音:聽返自己嗓音,最快捉到太快、太低聲,還有 er… um… 這類填充字。

4圖解 Diagrams

課題概念圖Short Presentations 短講匯報1開場重點 Focus詳細內容見下方2主體重點 Focus詳細內容見下方3結尾重點 Focus詳細內容見下方核心詞語演講 Presentati… · 觀眾 Audience · 投影片 Slide · 開場 Introducti…
課題概念圖 · 中英對照 bilingual

5例題示範 Example

任務:準備一分鐘短講 My Favourite Hobby,跟 Greeting → Topic → 三個重點 → 結尾 的結構寫講稿。

  1. 第一步:Greeting + 講明題目——Good afternoon, everyone. Today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography.
  2. 第二步:預告結構,聽眾易跟——First I will share how I started, then what I have learned, and finally some tips.
  3. 第三步:主體三個重點,每個兩三句——點開始(two years ago, my mother's old camera)、學到什麼(look at the world more carefully)、新手貼士(you only need a phone)。
  4. 第四步:用 In conclusion 總結——photography is fun, cheap and creative.
  5. 第五步:有禮收結——Thank you for listening. Does anyone have a question? 練習時記住眼神接觸、不要照稿讀。
  6. 答案:Good afternoon, everyone. Today I would like to talk about my favourite hobby, photography. I started two years ago with my mother's old camera, and now I visit a different district every weekend. Photography has taught me to look at the world more carefully — I notice colours, smiles and the shapes of clouds now. If you want to try, you only need a phone: start with things you love and keep your hands steady. In conclusion, photography is fun, cheap and creative. Thank you for listening. Does anyone have a question?

6常見錯誤 Mistakes

✗ 照稿讀
✓ 用提示卡
✗ 不望觀眾
✓ eye contact
✗ 太快
✓ 放慢
✗ 沒有結尾
✓ Thank you.

75 題快測 Quick check

Q1What is a presentation?

Q2Who is the audience?

Q3What is a visual aid?

Q4What is eye contact?

Q5How should you speak?

8重點回顧 Recap

  • 短講結構:Greeting → Topic → 3 points → In conclusion → Thank you
  • 開場預告結構:First… then… and finally…——聽眾容易跟
  • 每個重點講兩三句,加例子(Sham Shui Po)和感受
  • Cue card 只寫 keyword,事前練習三次以上
  • 眼神接觸、音量夠大、不要照稿讀;收尾開放問題:Does anyone have a question?

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