Paragraph Writing 写段落
基础大楷 + 句号。
- 四段结构：开头 → 玩法 → 下午 → 感受。
- 最高级写作好用：flies the highest。
- look forward to + 名词/ing。
文体小知识：Write a short paragraph.
§课文原文 Passage
1Our School Picnic
2Every autumn, our class has a school picnic. This year we go to a big park in Tai Po. I always look forward to this happy day.
3The weather is sunny and cool. We play ball games and fly kites on the grass. My friends share sandwiches and juice under a tree. Ken's kite flies the highest, and we all clap for him. After lunch, we take photos near the lake.
4In the afternoon, my teacher plays games with us too. We sing songs and tell funny stories on the grass. At three o'clock, we clean up the rubbish together. We put the bottles and papers into three bags. The park looks clean and beautiful again.
5The bus ride home is quiet because everyone is tired. Still, we all smile on our seats. I love our school picnic because we learn and play together. I cannot wait for next year's picnic!
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Our School Picnic
我们的学校旅行（标题）
Every autumn, our class has a school picnic.
每年秋天，我们班都会去学校旅行。
This year we go to a big park in Tai Po.
今年我们去大埔一个大公园。
I always look forward to this happy day.
我一直都好期待这个开心的日子。
The weather is sunny and cool.
天气晴朗又凉爽。
We play ball games and fly kites on the grass.
我们在草地上玩球类游戏同放风筝。
My friends share sandwiches and juice under a tree.
朋友们在树下面分享三文治同果汁。
Ken's kite flies the highest, and we all clap for him.
Ken 的风筝飞得最高，我们全部人都拍手。
After lunch, we take photos near the lake.
吃完午餐，我们在湖边拍照。
In the afternoon, my teacher plays games with us too.
下午，老师都同我们一起玩游戏。
We sing songs and tell funny stories on the grass.
我们在草地上唱歌同讲笑话。
At three o'clock, we clean up the rubbish together.
三点钟，我们一起收拾垃圾。
We put the bottles and papers into three bags.
我们把瓶子同纸分别放进三个袋子。
The park looks clean and beautiful again.
公园又变得干净又漂亮。
The bus ride home is quiet because everyone is tired.
回程的巴士很安静，因为个个都很累。
Still, we all smile on our seats.
不过我们坐在座位上都还在笑。
I love our school picnic because we learn and play together.
我好喜欢学校旅行，因为我们一起学习一起玩。
I cannot wait for next year's picnic!
我真是等不及明年的旅行！
1重点摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句号。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
写。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句号。
串字。
文法。
检查。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 范文结构范文 Our School Picnic 分四段：第一段开头，交代时间和地点；第二段写玩法；第三段写下午活动；第四段用感受收尾。一段只写一个焦点，每段另起新行。易错位：学生常把所有内容挤成一段，记住焦点一换就换段，每段首行的缩排或顶格格式要跟足。
- 开头段开头段三句：Every autumn, our class has a school picnic 交代时间和事件；This year we go to a big park in Tai Po 交代地点；I always look forward to this happy day 表达期待。易错位：look forward to 的 to 是介词，后面跟名词或 ing 动词，例如 look forward to seeing you；不能把它当成普通的不定式 to。
- 中段加小节中段写细节：The weather is sunny and cool 描述天气；We play ball games and fly kites 写两项活动，用 and 连接；My friends share sandwiches and juice under a tree 再加上地点 under a tree。主词 we、my friends 都是复数，动词用原形。易错位：fly kites 的 kites 用复数更自然，因为风筝通常不止一只。
- 最高级加分Ken's kite flies the highest 表示 Ken 的风筝飞得最高，the 加 est 的最高级用于三者以上的比较。写活动文章时加一句最高级，描写立刻生动，例如 the loudest cheer、the funniest game。易错位：最高级前面必须有 the；flies 加 s，因为主词 Ken's kite 是第三人称单数。
- 尾段感受结尾句 I love our school picnic because we learn and play together 用 because 带出原因：喜欢什么、因为什么，一句连起，收尾有力。易错位：because 之后必须是完整子句，要有主词 we 和动词 learn and play；只写 because happy 就不完整，而且原因要与前文呼应，不要突然转题。
- 格式检查格式三查：一查段落，每段另起新行，首行缩排；二查大楷和句号，每句开头大写、结尾有句号；三查串字和文法，逐句读一次，确认动词形式正确。三项全部过关才可以交卷。易错位：段落之间忘记换行是最常见的格式错，抄写时提醒自己：一个焦点写完，立即换段。
- 句式练习用同样的四段结构写 Our Sports Day：第一段交代时间地点，第二段写比赛，第三段写下午活动，第四段写感受。每段先写一句主题句，再加一两句细节，完成两段后检查一次格式。易错位：不要一开始就追求长句，先把四个焦点各自写清楚，段落自然成形。
5例题示范 Example
写〈Our Sports Day〉开头两段：照四段结构先完成前半，再检查格式。
- 开头：Every autumn, our school has a Sports Day. This year it is in October. 先交代时间和事件。
- 加期待：I always look forward to the races. look forward to 后面接名词 the races。
- 中段：The weather is sunny. I run in the race and my team wins a red star. 先写天气，再写活动。
- 最高级：Ben runs the fastest in our class. the 加 est，in our class 划定范围。
- 检查：段落是否分明？每句的大楷和句号齐吗？
- 答案：Every autumn, our school has a Sports Day. This year it is in October. I always look forward to the races. The weather is sunny. I run in the race and my team wins a red star. Ben runs the fastest in our class.
6常见错误 Mistakes
75 题快测 Quick check
Q1今年 picnic 去边？
Q2哪个的风筝飞得最高？
Q3朋友在树下做什么？
Q4三点钟做什么？
Q5为什么喜欢 picnic？
8重点回顾 Recap
- 四段结构：开头 → 玩法 → 下午 → 感受。
- 最高级写作好用：flies the highest。
- look forward to + 名词/ing。
- because 收尾带原因。
- 写完逐段检查大楷句号。