Diary 日记
基础大楷 + 句号。
- 抬头：日子, 日期 - 天气。
- because 带出心情原因。
- after / in the afternoon / at night 排时间。
文体小知识：Write a diary entry.
§课文原文 Passage
1Saturday, 16 May - Sunny
2Today I wake up early because I am very excited. My mother takes me to the Central Library. The library is quiet and cool, and there are books everywhere. I borrow three storybooks about animals. My mother reads magazines and drinks tea there. We sit by the big window and read quietly.
3After the library, we eat noodles in a small restaurant. The noodles are delicious, and the soup is hot. In the afternoon, I write my reading diary at my desk. I draw a picture of a panda on the cover. I write the title on the first page too.
4Writing a diary helps me remember my happy days. My teacher says good writers write a little every day. At night, I read one more story about a brave little bird. Tomorrow I will tell my best friend about my new books. I think she will want to read them too!
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Saturday, 16 May - Sunny
五月十六日（星期六）— 晴天（日记日期）
Today I wake up early because I am very excited.
今日我很早起床，因为太兴奋。
My mother takes me to the Central Library.
妈妈带我去中央图书馆。
The library is quiet and cool, and there are books everywhere.
图书馆又安静又凉爽，周围都是书。
I borrow three storybooks about animals.
我借了三本关于动物的故事书。
My mother reads magazines and drinks tea there.
妈妈在那里看杂志同喝茶。
We sit by the big window and read quietly.
我们坐在大窗旁边静静地看书。
After the library, we eat noodles in a small restaurant.
离开图书馆之后，我们在一间小餐厅吃面。
The noodles are delicious, and the soup is hot.
那些面很好吃，汤又热。
In the afternoon, I write my reading diary at my desk.
下午，我在书桌上写阅读日记。
I draw a picture of a panda on the cover.
我在封面画了一只熊猫。
I write the title on the first page too.
我还在第一页写了标题。
Writing a diary helps me remember my happy days.
写日记帮我记住开心的日子。
My teacher says good writers write a little every day.
老师说好的作家每天都会写一点。
At night, I read one more story about a brave little bird.
晚上，我多看一个关于勇敢小鸟的故事。
Tomorrow I will tell my best friend about my new books.
明天我会把新书的事告诉我最好的朋友。
I think she will want to read them too!
我想他都会想看！
1重点摘要 Summary
大楷 + 句号。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
写。
句子。
段落。
大楷。
句号。
串字。
文法。
检查。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 抬头格式日记第一行是抬头：Saturday, 16 May - Sunny，日期、月份、天气一行写完。星期之后加逗号，日子用数字，月份以大写开头，最后用短横连住天气。小三的格式比低年级更完整，天气也是内容的一部分。易错位：月份无论在句中哪个位置都要大写；日子用数字 16，不必写成 sixteenth。
- 开头带心情第一句写心情：Today I wake up early because I am very excited，因为兴奋所以早醒，because 把结果和原因连起来。日记是记录当天感受的文体，开头交代心情，读者立刻进入情境。易错位：如果日记写昨天的事，动词要转过去式，woke up、was excited；写今天的事就用现在式 wake up。
- 地点小节写出去的地方：My mother takes me to the Central Library，takes me to 表示带我去；The library is quiet and cool, and there are books everywhere 用两个形容词描述环境，再用 there are 说明书多。写地点先写名字，再写感觉。易错位：Central Library 是专有名词，两个字都大写；泛指图书馆才写 the library。
- 活动次序一天里的几件事要按顺序写：先去图书馆，午餐吃 noodles，下午写 reading diary，晚上再看多一个故事。时间词 after、in the afternoon、at night 帮助排序，读者一看就明白先后。易错位：时间词放在句首时，后面要加逗号；同一句写两件事才用 and 连接，不要把几件事挤进一句。
- 引述名人句日记也可以引述他人的句子：My teacher says good writers write a little every day，老师说好的作者每天都写一点。says 引出内容，之后的子句不加引号，这叫间接引述。易错位：间接引述中动词照现在式写；如果要直接引述原句，才用引号，例如 My teacher says, "Write every day."
- 检查四样写完日记检查四样：一查抬头，日期、月份、天气是否齐全；二查时态，写今天用现在式，写昨天全句转过去式；三查大楷和句号，每句开头结尾齐备；四查串字和文法。四样全过，日记才算完成。易错位：最常见的错是全文时态混合，一半现在式一半过去式，动笔前先决定写今天还是昨天。
- 今天写一篇动手写一篇：抬头一行，心情开头一句，中间三个活动各一句，最后一句总结感受，今晚就完成。日记贵在真实，写自己真实的一天，句子自然有内容。易错位：三个活动不必长，一句一个即可；总结句要回应开头的心情，例如 It is a quiet and happy day。
5例题示范 Example
写一篇图书馆日记：抬头、心情、三个活动、总结，四步完成。
- 抬头：Sunday, 17 May - Cloudy，星期之后加逗号，短横之后写天气。
- 心情开头：Today I wake up early because I am excited. because 连起早醒和兴奋。
- 活动一：My father takes me to the library. takes me to 表示带我去。
- 活动二：I read two story books about animals. two 之后用复数 books。
- 活动三：We eat noodles for lunch. for lunch 表示作为午餐。
- 总结：It is a quiet and happy day. 两个形容词用 and 连接，收束全文。
- 答案：Sunday, 17 May - Cloudy. Today I wake up early because I am excited. My father takes me to the library. I read two story books about animals. We eat noodles for lunch. It is a quiet and happy day.
6常见错误 Mistakes
75 题快测 Quick check
Q1日记那日天气点？
Q2妈妈带我去边？
Q3图书馆是点的？
Q4老师说好的作家怎么做？
Q5I am ___（excited / exciting）？
8重点回顾 Recap
- 抬头：日子, 日期 - 天气。
- because 带出心情原因。
- after / in the afternoon / at night 排时间。
- excited 讲人，exciting 讲东西。
- 日记尾加一句总结感受。