Diary 日记

基础

大楷 + 句号。

适合:小二英国语文 · 单元:写作 · 建议学习路径第 14/18 课

学完呢课,你会识:
  • 日记抬头:日期 + 天气。
  • 记昨天的事用过去式。
  • 三个不规则:go→went, eat→ate, see→saw。
文体:Writing有声朗读

文体小知识:Write a diary entry.

作者

英国语文English Language

§课文原文 Passage

1Miss Lee shows us how to write a diary. A diary tells what we did on a day. We write the date and the weather first. Then we write our story.

2Sunday, 13 October. Weather: cloudy. In the morning, I went to the library with my father. I borrowed three story books and read them with my classmate Amy. We read under a big tree. It was a happy day.

3I check the spelling, capital letters, full stops and grammar before I close my diary. I put my sentences in one paragraph. Writing a diary helps me remember my happy days. I love writing my diary. I will keep writing every week!

§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation

Miss Lee shows us how to write a diary.

李老师教我们怎样写日记。

A diary tells what we did on a day.

日记是记下我们某一天做过的事。

We write the date and the weather first.

我们首先写日期同天气。

Then we write our story.

接着就写下我们的故事。

Sunday, 13 October. Weather: cloudy.

十月十三日,星期日。天气:多云。

In the morning, I went to the library with my father.

早上,我同爸爸去了图书馆。

I borrowed three story books and read them with my classmate Amy.

我借了三本故事书,和同学 Amy 一起看。

We read under a big tree.

我们在一棵大树下面看书。

It was a happy day.

那真是开心的一天。

I check the spelling, capital letters, full stops and grammar before I close my diary.

合上日记之前,我会检查串字、大楷、句号同文法。

I put my sentences in one paragraph.

我会把所有句子写在同一段。

Writing a diary helps me remember my happy days.

写日记帮我记住那些开心的日子。

I love writing my diary.

我好喜欢写日记。

I will keep writing every week!

我会继续每个星期都写!

1重点摘要 Summary

大楷 + 句号。

2生字卡 Vocabulary

w
write动词

写。

s
sentence名词

句子。

p
paragraph名词

段落。

c
capital名词

大楷。

f
full stop短语

句号。

s
spelling名词

串字。

g
grammar名词

文法。

c
check动词

检查。

3逐步讲解 Steps

  1. 抬头格式举个例子:日记第一行写日期和天气:Sunday, 13 October. Weather: cloudy(多云)。这个格式小一学过,小二照样使用;先写星期几,再加日期,天气用 Weather: 带出,一行就完成了抬头,简单又清楚。
  2. 过去式登场举个例子:日记记录昨天发生的事,所以动词要转成过去式:I went to the library(go 变 went),I borrowed three story books(borrow 加 ed 变 borrowed)。一动笔就要提醒自己:这是昨天的事,动词全部要变。
  3. 不规则过去式三个举个例子:go 变 went、eat 变 ate、see 变 saw——三个最常用的不规则过去式。它们不按加 ed 的规则变化,只能个别记牢;测验也最喜欢考这三个。每天用它们各说一句昨天的事,一星期后就能脱口而出。
  4. 规则过去式举个例子:borrow 变 borrowed、play 变 played、watch 变 watched——大部分动词在字尾加 ed 就是过去式。规则简单,但要留意拼法:以 e 结尾的动词只加 d,例如 like 变 liked,写之前先看清楚字尾。
  5. 正文写法举个例子:In the morning, I went to the library with my father. I read the books with my classmate Amy under a big tree.——早上和爸爸去图书馆,再与同学 Amy 在大树下看书。read 的过去式拼法不变,读时靠上下文分辨;时间词 In the morning 放在句首交代顺序。
  6. 检查四样举个例子:写完日记要检查四样东西:check the spelling(拼字)、capital letters(大楷)、full stops(句号)以及 grammar(文法),特别要留意每个动词是否都用了过去式。四样逐项打勾,日记才算认真完成。
  7. 今天写一篇举个例子:用 went、ate、saw 写出昨天的三件事:I went to the park.(我去了公园)I ate a bun.(我吃了一个包)I saw a dog.(我看见一只狗)。三句过去式,加上日期和天气的抬头,就是一篇合格的日记。

4图解 Diagrams

英文作文结构:三段式 Essay structureIntroduction 开头主题句 topic sentence讲明你会写乜Body 正文一段一个重点例证+解释Conclusion 结尾总结重申立场唔好引入新观点评分四围· Content 内容:扣题+丰富· Language 语言:文法准确多样· Organisation 组织:段落分明连贯· 格式:书信/报告格式要啱连贯贴士:用连接词First · Moreover · However · Therefore · In conclusion交卷前 check list:串字·时态一致·大小写·格式——五分钟救三分
图 1:英文作文三段式

5例题示范 Example

写一篇过去式日记:先写抬头,再用三个句子记录昨天的事,最后加一句感受。

  1. 抬头:Monday, 14 October. Weather: sunny.,日期与天气写在第一行。
  2. 句一:I went to the park with my sister.,go 的过去式是 went。
  3. 句二:We ate sandwiches on the grass.,eat 的过去式是 ate。
  4. 句三:I saw a big dog near the gate.,see 的过去式是 saw。
  5. 加一句感受收结:It was a happy day.,was 是 is 的过去式。
  6. 检查:三个动词是否全部过去式?抬头、大楷、句号是否齐全?
  7. 答案:Monday, 14 October. Weather: sunny. I went to the park with my sister. We ate sandwiches on the grass. I saw a big dog near the gate. It was a happy day.

6常见错误 Mistakes

✗ Yesterday I go to the library.
✓ Yesterday I went to the library.(昨天的事用过去式)
✗ I goed to the park.
✓ I went to the park.(go 的过去式是 went)
✗ I eated a bun.
✓ I ate a bun.(eat 的过去式是 ate)
✗ borrowded
✓ borrowed( borrow + ed,不要双 d)
✗ Weather: happy
✓ 天气写 cloudy、sunny;happy 是心情。

75 题快测 Quick check

Q1昨天我去了边?

Q2go 的过去式是什么?

Q3eat 的过去式是什么?

Q4我借了多少本书?

Q5和哪个一起看书?

8重点回顾 Recap

  • 日记抬头:日期 + 天气。
  • 记昨天的事用过去式。
  • 三个不规则:go→went, eat→ate, see→saw。
  • 大部分动词加 ed:borrowed, played。
  • 写完检查四样:spelling、大楷、句号、grammar。

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