Friendly Letter 友好書信

基礎

友好信用非正式語氣。

適合:小六英國語文 · 單元:寫作 · 建議學習路徑第 15/21 課

學完呢課,你會識:
  • 友好信格式:日期 → Dear 名, → 正文 → 結語 → 署名。
  • 結語用 Love / Best wishes,不用 Yours sincerely。
  • 語氣輕鬆:How are you? I miss you.
文體:Writing有聲朗讀

文體小知識:To friends and family.

作者

英國語文English Language

§課文原文 Passage

112 May 2026 — Dear Uncle David,

2How are you? I have some exciting news to share with you. Last month, I won second prize in the school writing competition! I could not believe my ears when our teacher called my name. My essay was about a flag-selling day with my classmates. We raised over two thousand dollars for the children's hospital. My parents were very proud of me, and Dad took our whole class out for noodles.

3School life is busy but fun. I am practising basketball every Tuesday and Thursday, and I can almost do a lay-up now. How is Auntie Mary? Is my little cousin learning to walk now? Please send me a photo of her. I also want to ask about your new job in the city. Grandma misses you, and she is teaching me to make dumplings.

4Give my love to Auntie Mary and the baby — we all send our love from Hong Kong. I must finish my homework now. Please write back soon and tell me all your news — your letters always make me smile. Best wishes to everyone at home. Yours, Marco

§逐句中文翻譯 Sentence-by-sentence translation

12 May 2026 — Dear Uncle David,

二零二六年五月十二日 — 親愛的 David 叔叔:

How are you?

你好嗎?

I have some exciting news to share with you.

我有些很興奮的消息想同你分享。

Last month, I won second prize in the school writing competition!

上個月,我在學校寫作比賽拿了第二名!

I could not believe my ears when our teacher called my name.

老師叫到我的名字時,我簡直不敢相信自己的耳朵。

My essay was about a flag-selling day with my classmates.

我那篇文章是寫同班同學一起賣旗的一天。

We raised over two thousand dollars for the children's hospital.

我們為兒童醫院籌到超過二千元。

My parents were very proud of me, and Dad took our whole class out for noodles.

爸爸媽媽很為我驕傲,爸爸還請了全班同學去吃麵。

School life is busy but fun.

學校生活又忙又好玩。

I am practising basketball every Tuesday and Thursday, and I can almost do a lay-up now.

我逢星期二、四練籃球,現在差不多能做到上籃。

How is Auntie Mary?

Mary 嬸嬸好嗎?

Is my little cousin learning to walk now?

我的堂妹是不是正在學走路?

Please send me a photo of her.

請寄一張她的照片給我。

I also want to ask about your new job in the city.

我還想問一問你在市區的新工作。

Grandma misses you, and she is teaching me to make dumplings.

奶奶很掛念你,現在還教我包餃子。

Give my love to Auntie Mary and the baby — we all send our love from Hong Kong.

幫我問候 Mary 嬸嬸和寶寶——我們在香港都很掛念大家。

I must finish my homework now.

我要去做功課。

Please write back soon and tell me all your news — your letters always make me smile.

快些寫信回來,和我說一說你的近況——你的信常常都令我笑。

Best wishes to everyone at home.

祝家中各位安好。

Yours, Marco

你的侄兒 Marco 上

1重點摘要 Summary

友好信用非正式語氣。

2生字卡 Vocabulary

D
Dear稱謂

親愛的。

L
Love結語

愛。

B
Best wishes結語

祝好。

d
date名詞

日期。

n
news名詞

消息。

a
ask about短語

問起。

w
write back短語

回信。

y
yours結語

你的。

3逐步講解 Steps

  1. 格式考點是友好書信的五部分格式:右上角寫日期,然後是稱呼 Dear 加名字,接著是正文,最後是結語與署名,例如 Dear Tom, ... Best wishes, Ann. 五個部分缺一不可,版面整齊,閱卷老師一眼便能看清。方法是寫前默記五部分的名單,寫完逐項點數。易錯之處是次序錯亂或漏寫署名,格式分便有損失;日期、稱呼、正文、結語、署名,五項齊全才是合格的書信,這是書信題的底線。
  2. 首段考點是首段的寫法:以問候與近況開場,例如 How are you? I miss you very much. 先問候對方,令讀者感到親切,再帶出寫信的原因,例如搬了新家或轉了新學校。方法是問候一至兩句便轉入正題,不宜冗長。易錯之處是首段便把所有事情說完,中段反而無話可寫;首段只負責問候與點出寫信緣由,事情留到中段慢慢說,層次便分明,讀的人也覺得舒暢,這是書信的節奏。
  3. 中段考點是中段的寫法:中段是書信的主體,說出自己最近的事情,例如 I moved to a new school. It is big and beautiful. 一封信說一至兩件事便足夠,每件事配一句細節或感受,內容就充實而不散亂。易錯之處是把五六件事擠在一段,每件三言兩語,讀來浮光掠影;倒不如集中寫一兩件,寫得具體,例如新學校怎樣大、怎樣美,朋友讀了才有畫面,書信才有感染力。
  4. 尾段考點是尾段與結語的規範:尾段送上祝福,並邀請對方回信,例如 Please write back soon. Best wishes. 結語常用 Best wishes、Love、Yours,下一行寫署名;祝福與署名各佔一行,版面才整齊美觀。易錯之處是結語與署名擠在同一行,或漏掉邀請回信的一句;請對方回信是書信的禮貌,也是結尾的自然收束,這一筆不可省,寫完再看一眼版面,整齊才交卷。
  5. 日期格式考點是英文日期的寫法:日加月份加年份,例如 12 May 2026,寫在信紙右上角、稱呼之上。日子用數字,月份用英文字並大寫首字母;寫成 12th May 2026 也可以。方法是全信採用同一種寫法,前後一致。易錯之處是月份細寫,例如 12 may 2026,或次序混亂寫成月份在前;日期是書信的第一印象,寫得準確而工整,整封信的格式便有了好的開始,這一分最穩妥,也最不該失。
  6. 非正式語氣考點是友好書信的語氣分寸:寫給朋友與家人,語氣輕鬆而不失禮貌,例如 How are you? I miss you. 可以用縮寫 I'm、don't,也可以用感嘆號增添暖意。方法是想像對方就坐在面前,用說話的語氣下筆,自然便親切。易錯之處是語氣過分隨便,用了粗俗字眼;友好書信依然要有禮貌,親切與尊重並存,這才是給朋友寫信應有的態度,也是語氣題的評分要點。

5例題示範 Example

問題:朋友搬到新屋之後,怎樣寫一封友好書信告訴他我的近況?按格式五個部分逐層完成。

  1. 第一步:寫日期與稱呼 — 12 May 2026 寫在右上角,下一行寫 Dear Tom,。
  2. 第二步:首段問候 — How are you? I miss you very much. 兩句問候開場,語氣親切。
  3. 第三步:中段交代近況 — I moved to a new school. It is big and beautiful. 說出轉校消息並加一句描寫。
  4. 第四步:補一件小事 — I made a new friend called Jack. 小事令書信更有生活氣息。
  5. 第五步:祝福與署名 — Please visit me soon. Best wishes, Ann. 邀請探訪,結語與署名各佔一行。
  6. 答案:示範答案:Dear Tom,
    How are you? I miss you. I moved to a new school. It is big and beautiful, and I made a new friend called Jack. Please visit me soon.
    Best wishes,
    Ann 格式五個部分齊全:日期、稱呼、問候、近況與祝福署名。

6常見錯誤 Mistakes

✗ Yours sincerely, John.(友好信)
✓ Best wishes, John.(友好信用輕鬆結語)
✗ 信裡面沒有日期。
✓ 右上角寫日期:12 May 2026.
✗ Dear Tom 沒有逗號。
✓ Dear Tom,(稱呼後要逗號)
✗ 寫完不請人回信。
✓ 加一句 Please write soon. / Please visit me soon.

76 題快測 Quick check

Q1友好信結語?

Q2稱謂?

Q3第一段寫什麼?

Q4最後段寫什麼?

Q5日期放在哪裡?

Q6友好信用正式還是非正式?

8重點回顧 Recap

  • 友好信格式:日期 → Dear 名, → 正文 → 結語 → 署名。
  • 結語用 Love / Best wishes,不用 Yours sincerely。
  • 語氣輕鬆:How are you? I miss you.
  • 正文講一兩件近況就夠。
  • 尾句請人回信:Please write soon.

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