Friendly Letter 友好书信
基础友好信用非正式语气。
- 友好信格式:日期 → Dear 名, → 正文 → 结语 → 署名。
- 结语用 Love / Best wishes,不用 Yours sincerely。
- 语气轻松:How are you? I miss you.
文体小知识:To friends and family.
§课文原文 Passage
112 May 2026 — Dear Uncle David,
2How are you? I have some exciting news to share with you. Last month, I won second prize in the school writing competition! I could not believe my ears when our teacher called my name. My essay was about a flag-selling day with my classmates. We raised over two thousand dollars for the children's hospital. My parents were very proud of me, and Dad took our whole class out for noodles.
3School life is busy but fun. I am practising basketball every Tuesday and Thursday, and I can almost do a lay-up now. How is Auntie Mary? Is my little cousin learning to walk now? Please send me a photo of her. I also want to ask about your new job in the city. Grandma misses you, and she is teaching me to make dumplings.
4Give my love to Auntie Mary and the baby — we all send our love from Hong Kong. I must finish my homework now. Please write back soon and tell me all your news — your letters always make me smile. Best wishes to everyone at home. Yours, Marco
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
12 May 2026 — Dear Uncle David,
二零二六年五月十二日 — 亲爱的 David 叔叔:
How are you?
你好吗?
I have some exciting news to share with you.
我有些很兴奋的消息想同你分享。
Last month, I won second prize in the school writing competition!
上个月,我在学校写作比赛拿了第二名!
I could not believe my ears when our teacher called my name.
老师叫到我的名字时,我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。
My essay was about a flag-selling day with my classmates.
我那篇文章是写同班同学一起卖旗的一天。
We raised over two thousand dollars for the children's hospital.
我们为儿童医院筹到超过二千元。
My parents were very proud of me, and Dad took our whole class out for noodles.
爸爸妈妈很为我骄傲,爸爸还请了全班同学去吃面。
School life is busy but fun.
学校生活又忙又好玩。
I am practising basketball every Tuesday and Thursday, and I can almost do a lay-up now.
我逢星期二、四练篮球,现在差不多能做到上篮。
How is Auntie Mary?
Mary 婶婶好吗?
Is my little cousin learning to walk now?
我的堂妹是不是正在学走路?
Please send me a photo of her.
请寄一张她的照片给我。
I also want to ask about your new job in the city.
我还想问一问你在市区的新工作。
Grandma misses you, and she is teaching me to make dumplings.
奶奶很挂念你,现在还教我包饺子。
Give my love to Auntie Mary and the baby — we all send our love from Hong Kong.
帮我问候 Mary 婶婶和宝宝——我们在香港都很挂念大家。
I must finish my homework now.
我要去做功课。
Please write back soon and tell me all your news — your letters always make me smile.
快些写信回来,和我说一说你的近况——你的信常常都令我笑。
Best wishes to everyone at home.
祝家中各位安好。
Yours, Marco
你的侄儿 Marco 上
1重点摘要 Summary
友好信用非正式语气。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
亲爱的。
爱。
祝好。
日期。
消息。
问起。
回信。
你的。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 格式考点是友好书信的五部分格式:右上角写日期,然后是称呼 Dear 加名字,接著是正文,最后是结语与署名,例如 Dear Tom, ... Best wishes, Ann. 五个部分缺一不可,版面整齐,阅卷老师一眼便能看清。方法是写前默记五部分的名单,写完逐项点数。易错之处是次序错乱或漏写署名,格式分便有损失;日期、称呼、正文、结语、署名,五项齐全才是合格的书信,这是书信题的底线。
- 首段考点是首段的写法:以问候与近况开场,例如 How are you? I miss you very much. 先问候对方,令读者感到亲切,再带出写信的原因,例如搬了新家或转了新学校。方法是问候一至两句便转入正题,不宜冗长。易错之处是首段便把所有事情说完,中段反而无话可写;首段只负责问候与点出写信缘由,事情留到中段慢慢说,层次便分明,读的人也觉得舒畅,这是书信的节奏。
- 中段考点是中段的写法:中段是书信的主体,说出自己最近的事情,例如 I moved to a new school. It is big and beautiful. 一封信说一至两件事便足够,每件事配一句细节或感受,内容就充实而不散乱。易错之处是把五六件事挤在一段,每件三言两语,读来浮光掠影;倒不如集中写一两件,写得具体,例如新学校怎样大、怎样美,朋友读了才有画面,书信才有感染力。
- 尾段考点是尾段与结语的规范:尾段送上祝福,并邀请对方回信,例如 Please write back soon. Best wishes. 结语常用 Best wishes、Love、Yours,下一行写署名;祝福与署名各占一行,版面才整齐美观。易错之处是结语与署名挤在同一行,或漏掉邀请回信的一句;请对方回信是书信的礼貌,也是结尾的自然收束,这一笔不可省,写完再看一眼版面,整齐才交卷。
- 日期格式考点是英文日期的写法:日加月份加年份,例如 12 May 2026,写在信纸右上角、称呼之上。日子用数字,月份用英文字并大写首字母;写成 12th May 2026 也可以。方法是全信采用同一种写法,前后一致。易错之处是月份细写,例如 12 may 2026,或次序混乱写成月份在前;日期是书信的第一印象,写得准确而工整,整封信的格式便有了好的开始,这一分最稳妥,也最不该失。
- 非正式语气考点是友好书信的语气分寸:写给朋友与家人,语气轻松而不失礼貌,例如 How are you? I miss you. 可以用缩写 I'm、don't,也可以用感叹号增添暖意。方法是想像对方就坐在面前,用说话的语气下笔,自然便亲切。易错之处是语气过分随便,用了粗俗字眼;友好书信依然要有礼貌,亲切与尊重并存,这才是给朋友写信应有的态度,也是语气题的评分要点。
5例题示范 Example
问题:朋友搬到新屋之后,怎样写一封友好书信告诉他我的近况?按格式五个部分逐层完成。
- 第一步:写日期与称呼 — 12 May 2026 写在右上角,下一行写 Dear Tom,。
- 第二步:首段问候 — How are you? I miss you very much. 两句问候开场,语气亲切。
- 第三步:中段交代近况 — I moved to a new school. It is big and beautiful. 说出转校消息并加一句描写。
- 第四步:补一件小事 — I made a new friend called Jack. 小事令书信更有生活气息。
- 第五步:祝福与署名 — Please visit me soon. Best wishes, Ann. 邀请探访,结语与署名各占一行。
- 答案:示范答案:Dear Tom,
How are you? I miss you. I moved to a new school. It is big and beautiful, and I made a new friend called Jack. Please visit me soon.
Best wishes,
Ann 格式五个部分齐全:日期、称呼、问候、近况与祝福署名。
6常见错误 Mistakes
76 题快测 Quick check
Q1友好信结语?
Q2称谓?
Q3第一段写什么?
Q4最后段写什么?
Q5日期放在哪里?
Q6友好信用正式还是非正式?
8重点回顾 Recap
- 友好信格式:日期 → Dear 名, → 正文 → 结语 → 署名。
- 结语用 Love / Best wishes,不用 Yours sincerely。
- 语气轻松:How are you? I miss you.
- 正文讲一两件近况就够。
- 尾句请人回信:Please write soon.