Listening Summary 聆听摘要
进阶主题 + 重点。
- 摘要公式:一句主题(+背景)→ 2-3 个重点,一句一点。
- 讲者常常自己画重点:「First / Second / Third」就是你的三点。
- 数字要保留(7:30、9 月 1 日),但句子要用自己的文字改写。
文体小知识:Write what you heard.
§课文原文 Passage
1Good morning, everyone. Before the first bell, I have a short announcement about our school bus service. As many of you know, the traffic study we conducted last term showed serious congestion at the main gate. The transport committee has therefore approved three changes, which will take effect from the first of September.
2First, the departure time will move from 7:15 to 7:30 a.m. Buses currently leave too early, and nearly forty per cent of passengers arrive before the classrooms are even open. Second, a new stop will be added at Mei Foo Estate, following requests from families in that district. Students there previously had to walk fifteen minutes to the nearest stop. Third, fees will remain unchanged this year, as the committee has decided to absorb the rising fuel costs rather than pass them on to parents. Please remember that these changes apply to all routes, including the Kowloon Tong line.
3To sum up: a later start, one new stop, and no change in fees. When you write your summary of this announcement, reorganise the three main points in your own words — do not copy whole sentences from my speech. Keep it concise: a good summary contains every key point but no unnecessary detail. Organize the information logically, paraphrase rather than repeat, and check that each note you took actually appears in your final version.
4Full timetables will be posted on the notice board and the school website this Friday. A new route map will also be attached to each student handbook. If you have questions, speak to Miss Chan in the general office. Thank you, and have a productive term.
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
Good morning, everyone.
各位,早上好。
Before the first bell, I have a short announcement about our school bus service.
在上课钟响起之前,我有一则关于校巴服务的简短宣布。
As many of you know, the traffic study we conducted last term showed serious congestion at the main gate.
你们许多人都知道,我们上学期进行的交通研究显示正门挤塞严重。
The transport committee has therefore approved three changes, which will take effect from the first of September.
因此,交通委员会通过了三项改动,由九月一日起生效。
First, the departure time will move from 7:15 to 7:30 a.m.
第一,开车时间由早上七时十五分改为七时三十分。
Buses currently leave too early, and nearly forty per cent of passengers arrive before the classrooms are even open.
目前校巴开出太早,近四成乘客到达时课室根本仍未开放。
Second, a new stop will be added at Mei Foo Estate, following requests from families in that district.
第二,应美孚新邨家庭的要求,将在该处增设一个新站。
Students there previously had to walk fifteen minutes to the nearest stop.
该区学生以往要步行十五分钟才到最近的车站。
Third, fees will remain unchanged this year, as the committee has decided to absorb the rising fuel costs rather than pass them on to parents.
第三,今年车费维持不变,因为委员会决定自行承担上升的燃油成本,而非转嫁家长。
Please remember that these changes apply to all routes, including the Kowloon Tong line.
请谨记,这些改动适用于所有路线,包括九龙塘线。
To sum up: a later start, one new stop, and no change in fees.
总括而言:较迟开车、新增一站、车费不变。
When you write your summary of this announcement, reorganise the three main points in your own words — do not copy whole sentences from my speech.
你撰写本宣布的摘要时,须用自己的文字重新组织三个要点——切勿照抄我整句话。
Keep it concise: a good summary contains every key point but no unnecessary detail.
要精简:好的摘要包含每个关键要点,却没有多余细节。
Organize the information logically, paraphrase rather than repeat, and check that each note you took actually appears in your final version.
有条理地组织资料,用改写而非照抄,并检查你记下的每一点都真正出现在最终版本。
Full timetables will be posted on the notice board and the school website this Friday.
完整时间表将于本星期五张贴在布告板和学校网站。
A new route map will also be attached to each student handbook.
每本学生手册亦会附上新路线图。
If you have questions, speak to Miss Chan in the general office.
如有疑问,请向校务处陈老师查询。
Thank you, and have a productive term.
谢谢大家,祝你们有个充实的学期。
1重点摘要 Summary
主题 + 重点。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
摘要。
重点。
小节。
改写。
组织。
简洁。
关键。
笔记。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 主题主题句的考点是摘要有固定开法,首句必须交代什么事、涉及谁、何时生效。方法是听录音时抓住通告的目的与背景,压缩成一句话:因正门交通挤塞,交通委员会通过三项改动,九月一日生效。以本课为例,通告首段先交代背景(交通研究发现正门严重挤塞),再讲主题(三项校巴改动),两者合并正是主题句。易错位在于考生开首即写细节(七时三十分开出),主题与背景反而缺席,摘要顿失骨架;先主题后细节的次序不可倒转。
- 重点重点的考点是摘要只收二至三个重点,每点一句,涵盖全部关键资讯。方法是讲者会用 First、Second、Third 替你画好重点:第一,开出时间由七时十五分改为七时三十分,因为近四成学生太早到校;第二,新增美孚新邨站,该区学生以往要步行十五分钟;第三,费用不变,油价上升由委员会承担。以本课为例,三点各占一句,资讯完整无遗。易错位在于考生把通告末段的附带小节(时间表何时张贴、路线图何处领取)也当成重点写入;分辨主讯息与附带资讯是摘要题的核心能力。
- 改写改写的考点是数字必须准确保留,句子却要彻底重写,照抄成句零分。方法是先抄下所有数字(七时三十分、九月一日、十五分钟、四成),再用自己的句式重写内容,例如 the departure time will move from 7:15 to 7:30 可改写为 departures are delayed by fifteen minutes。以本课示范摘要为例,费用不变写成 fees stay unchanged,并补上委员会承担油价升幅。易错位在于考生保留数字却整句照抄广播原句,被评为抄袭;或者改写时改动数字,资料分全失。paraphrase rather than repeat 是摘要题的铁律。
- 长度长度的考点是摘要有字数上限,本课为五十至八十字,原则是齐全而不冗长。方法是写前估算:主题一句约十五字,三个重点各约二十字,刚好在范围之内;凡与三项改动无直接关系的细节,例如时间表何时张贴、路线图何处领取,一律删去。以本课示范摘要为例,全篇约六十字,三项改动齐全而没有多余内容。易错位在于考生怕不齐全而把附带资讯全部塞进去,超出字数上限被扣分;谨记 a good summary contains every key point but no unnecessary detail。
- 写完核对核对的考点是摘要写完不等于完成,核对程序直接决定资料分。方法是交卷前逐项检查三件事:笔记中每个要点是否都出现在摘要之内、所有数字是否准确无误、有没有整句照抄原声;每项核对完毕即在旁边画勾。以本课示范摘要为例,核对结果是三点齐备、七时三十分与九月一日无误、全部句子属改写。易错位在于考生写完即收卷,漏了一个重点也浑然不觉;预留两分钟逐项检查,是摘要题成本最低的分数保障。
- 逻辑排位逻辑排位的考点是摘要内容须按逻辑排列,不是想到什么便写什么。方法是采用固定框架:主题句先行,之后依次为重点一、重点二、重点三;排序跟随讲者的原序,或者按重要性排列,两者皆可,但须一以贯之。以本课示范摘要为例,按讲者的 First、Second、Third 顺序铺排,读来自然流畅。易错位在于考生把改动内容与背景原因交错夹杂,段落紊乱,组织分受损;谨记 organize the information logically,摘要绝不可以是一团乱麻。
- 不加意见不加意见的考点是摘要的本质是压缩他人观点,不是发表个人意见。方法是只写讲者说过的内容,改写句式可以,添加评论不可以;写每一句时自问:这句是讲者的资讯,还是我自己的想法?以本课示范摘要为例,全篇复述委员会的决定与原因,没有一句我认为或者个人评价。易错位在于考生在结尾加插个人意见,例如批评新时间不方便,超出摘要的职能,内容分被扣;记住你的任务是压缩资讯,不是评论时事。
5例题示范 Example
这段校巴通告有三项改动。写一个 50-80 字摘要:一句主题加三个重点,全程用自己的文字。
- 第一步:抓主题一句:因正门交通挤塞,交通委员会通过三项改动,9 月 1 日生效。
- 第二步:重点一:开出时间 7:15 改 7:30——因为近四成学生太早到、课室未开。
- 第三步:重点二:新增美孚新邨站——该区学生以前要步行十五分钟。
- 第四步:重点三:费用不变——委员会自行吸收油价上升;改动适用所有路线包括九龙塘线。
- 第五步:核对:三点齐、数字保留、句子全部 paraphrase;时间表什么时候张贴这些小节不用写。
- 答案:摘要示范(约 60 字):「因正门交通挤塞,交通委员会由 9 月 1 日起实施三项校巴改动:开出时间延至上午七时半,以免学生过早到校;新增美孚新邨站,方便原本要步行十五分钟的学生;收费维持不变,油价上升由委员会承担。改动适用于所有路线。」写法要点:开首一句讲主题加背景,接著三个重点各一句,数字保留(7:30、十五分钟、9 月 1 日)但句子全部改写,不照抄广播原句;结尾无必要加时间表小节——摘要要齐而不要长。
6常见错误 Mistakes
76 题快测 Quick check
Q1聆听摘要写什么?
Q2长度?
Q3技巧?
Q4要包含?
Q5不要包含?
Q6时态?
8重点回顾 Recap
- 摘要公式:一句主题(+背景)→ 2-3 个重点,一句一点。
- 讲者常常自己画重点:「First / Second / Third」就是你的三点。
- 数字要保留(7:30、9 月 1 日),但句子要用自己的文字改写。
- 摘要要齐不要长:50-80 字,通告小节(什么时候张贴)可以删。
- 写完核对:笔记里每个要点是否都出现在摘要中?