Describing a Person 描写人物
基础外貌 + 性格 + 嗜好。
- 描写人物三步：外貌 → 性格 → 嗜好。
- is + 形容词（is tall）；has + 名词（has long hair）。
- 性格词：kind、funny、friendly、helpful、clever。
文体小知识：Look, personality, hobbies.
§课文原文 Passage
1This is my grandmother, and she is the kindest person in my family. She is seventy years old, but she is still very healthy. She says growing old is not scary at all. She lives with us and takes care of us every day.
2She is short and a little fat, with white hair and a warm smile. My uncle is tall, but Grandma is short. She always wears a purple cardigan and comfortable shoes. When she laughs, her eyes shine like stars.
3Grandma is kind to everyone, and she never gets angry. She is also very funny, and her stories make us laugh. All our neighbours say she is friendly and helpful. She is hardworking too; she cleans the whole flat every week. She keeps our home tidy and cosy.
4Every morning, she does tai chi in the park with her friends. When I am sad, she always listens and cheers me up. She teaches me to stay young at heart. I want to be as kind as her when I grow up. She is my hero. I love her very much.
§逐句中文翻译 Sentence-by-sentence translation
This is my grandmother, and she is the kindest person in my family.
这位是我奶奶，她是家里最善良的人。
She is seventy years old, but she is still very healthy.
她七十岁，但是依然好健康。
She says growing old is not scary at all.
她说变老一点都不可怕。
She lives with us and takes care of us every day.
她同我们一起住，每天照顾我们。
She is short and a little fat, with white hair and a warm smile.
她长得矮矮的、有点胖，有一头白发同温暖的笑容。
My uncle is tall, but Grandma is short.
我叔叔好高，但奶奶就好矮。
She always wears a purple cardigan and comfortable shoes.
她常常穿紫色冷衫同舒服的鞋。
When she laughs, her eyes shine like stars.
她笑起来，眼睛好像星星那么闪。
Grandma is kind to everyone, and she never gets angry.
奶奶对人人都很好，从来不发脾气。
She is also very funny, and her stories make us laugh.
她还好搞笑，她的故事常常逗笑我们。
All our neighbours say she is friendly and helpful.
所有邻居都说她友善又乐于助人。
She is hardworking too; she cleans the whole flat every week.
她还好勤力，每个星期都会打扫整间屋。
She keeps our home tidy and cosy.
她令我们家又整齐又温馨。
Every morning, she does tai chi in the park with her friends.
每日早上，她会和朋友在公园打太极。
When I am sad, she always listens and cheers me up.
我不开心的时候，她总会听我说话、哄我开心。
She teaches me to stay young at heart.
她教我保持心境年轻。
I want to be as kind as her when I grow up.
我长大后也想像她一样善良。
She is my hero.
她是我心目中的英雄。
I love her very much.
我好爱她。
1重点摘要 Summary
外貌 + 性格 + 嗜好。
2生字卡 Vocabulary
高。
矮。
年轻。
年长。
善良。
搞笑。
勤力。
友善。
3逐步讲解 Steps
- 外貌描写外貌常用的词汇有 tall（高）、short（矮）、slim（纤瘦），以及发型描述如 long black hair（黑色长发）、curly hair（卷发）。例句：She is tall and slim. 要注意描述头发时，长度、颜色与发型可以并列，例如 long straight hair；形容词放在 is 之后，特征名词放在 has 之后；外貌描写选两三个最突出的特点即可，不必由头到脚全部写完。
- 性格描述性格常用的形容词有 kind（善良）、funny（有趣）、friendly（友善）、hardworking（勤奋）、helpful（乐于助人）。例句：He is kind and helpful. 要注意性格形容词与 be 动词连用；两个性格并列时用 and 连接；be 动词随 he 或 she 不变形，句子结构保持简单；写朋友或家人时选用正面词语，避免负面形容词，这是人物描写的基本礼仪。
- 嗜好描述嗜好的句式是 likes 加动词 ing，例如：She likes reading. He likes playing football. 要注意 likes 之后的动词必须用 ing 形式，不能说 likes read；主语是第三人称单数时 like 要加 s；可以在后面补充时间或频率，例如 She likes reading before bed；也可以用 love 替换 like，语气更强烈，例如 He loves swimming in summer.
- 结构介绍人物的固定结构是：This is 加名字开头，然后 He is 或 She is 描述外貌与性格，再用 He likes 或 She likes 描述嗜好。例句：This is my brother. He is tall. He likes cycling. 要注意三个句式各司其职，一般按外貌、性格、嗜好的顺序排列；人称代词要按性别选 he 或 she，全篇保持一致；按这个框架写，三四句就能完成一段人物介绍。
- is / has 分工is 与 has 的分工要分清：is 后面接形容词，例如 She is tall.；has 后面接特征名词，例如 She has long black hair. 要注意高矮胖瘦这类性质用 is，头发、眼镜这类看得见的物件用 has，例如 He has glasses；不能说 She has tall 或 She is long hair，两种句式不可互换；判断方法是先看后面是形容词还是名词，再决定用 is 还是 has.
- 性格要有事例每个性格形容词最好跟一个具体事例，人物才会立体。例如：She is kind — she takes care of us every day. 要注意事例用一般现在式描述经常的行为；一句性格加一句事例，是最稳妥的搭配；事例可以来自日常观察，例如帮同学补习、照顾年幼的弟妹；只堆形容词而不给事例，文章会显得空泛，这是描写人物的关键技巧。
5例题示范 Example
问题：怎样写一段介绍最好朋友的短文？
- 第一步：开头直接点名，用 My best friend is 加名字，例如：My best friend is Jane.
- 第二步：描写外貌，is 配形容词、has 配特征名词，例如：She is tall and has long black hair.
- 第三步：描述性格并补充事例，使人物立体，例如：She is funny and kind.
- 第四步：写嗜好，likes 之后用动词 ing，并可加上两人一起的活动，例如：She likes reading. We always sit together.
- 第五步：以感受收结，表达对这段友谊的珍惜，例如：I am happy to have a friend like her.
- 答案：示范答案：My best friend is Jane. She is tall and has long black hair. She is funny and kind — she always makes me laugh. She likes reading, and we sit together every day. I am happy to have a friend like her.
6常见错误 Mistakes
76 题快测 Quick check
Q1描写人物讲什么？
Q2外貌？
Q3性格？
Q4嗜好？
Q5点开头？
Q6好形容词例子？
8重点回顾 Recap
- 描写人物三步：外貌 → 性格 → 嗜好。
- is + 形容词（is tall）；has + 名词（has long hair）。
- 性格词：kind、funny、friendly、helpful、clever。
- 每个性格词跟一个事例先有说服力。
- He / She 和它的动词要一致：She likes...