Letters and Emails
BasicLetters.
- Formal email structure: subject line → Dear + title → purpose → contributions → Yours sincerely + full name
- State your purpose in the first line: I am writing to apply for membership of…
- Back up claims with evidence: my class collected six boxes of old batteries in one month
文體小知識:Formal words earn formal replies.
§Text Passage
1Formal email to the teacher-in-charge. To: Mr Lam (teacher-in-charge, Environment Club). Subject line: Application to join the Environment Club. Greeting: Dear Mr Lam. I am Chris Wong, a Form 2 student from Class 2A, and I am writing to apply for membership of the School Environment Club.
2Your club is the most active group in our school, and I would love to join your weekend activities. I have loved nature since primary school, and I joined a beach cleanup with my family last summer. I am hard-working, and I can help design posters and organise recycling bins. I also speak clearly, so I can explain our activities to junior students. Last year, I helped my class collect old batteries, and we filled six boxes in one month. In addition, I promise to attend every meeting and to finish any task you give me. Miss Ho, my class teacher, can act as my referee if you need one. I have attached my application form and a short introduction letter to this email. Please open the attachment when you check this message.
3Please reply to me at this address if any further information is needed. An email like this is formal, not informal, so I have used polite words throughout. I have sent it to the correct recipient and checked every line. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Sign-off: Yours sincerely, Chris Wong (Class 2A)
§Sentence-by-sentence translation Sentence-by-sentence translation
Formal email to the teacher-in-charge.
給負責老師的正式電郵。
To: Mr Lam (teacher-in-charge, Environment Club).
收件人:林老師(環境學會負責老師)。
Subject line: Application to join the Environment Club.
主旨:申請加入環境學會。
Greeting: Dear Mr Lam.
問候語:林老師,您好。
I am Chris Wong, a Form 2 student from Class 2A, and I am writing to apply for membership of the School Environment Club.
我是2A班的中二學生黃子謙,寫信申請加入學校環境學會。
Your club is the most active group in our school, and I would love to join your weekend activities.
貴會是本校最活躍的組織,我很想參加你們的週末活動。
I have loved nature since primary school, and I joined a beach cleanup with my family last summer.
我從小學開始就喜愛大自然,去年暑假還和家人參加了海灘清潔活動。
I am hard-working, and I can help design posters and organise recycling bins.
我勤奮努力,可以協助設計海報和整理回收箱。
I also speak clearly, so I can explain our activities to junior students.
我說話清晰,可以向低年級同學解釋我們的活動。
Last year, I helped my class collect old batteries, and we filled six boxes in one month.
去年,我協助班上收集舊電池,一個月就裝滿了六箱。
In addition, I promise to attend every meeting and to finish any task you give me.
此外,我承諾出席每次會議,並完成你交給我的任何任務。
Miss Ho, my class teacher, can act as my referee if you need one.
我的班主任何老師可以擔任我的推薦人,如有需要請聯絡她。
I have attached my application form and a short introduction letter to this email.
我已在此電郵附上申請表和一封簡短自我介紹信。
Please open the attachment when you check this message.
請你在查看這封訊息時打開附件。
Please reply to me at this address if any further information is needed.
如需更多資料,請回覆此地址給我。
An email like this is formal, not informal, so I have used polite words throughout.
這類電郵屬於正式書信而非閒談,所以我全篇都用了禮貌用語。
I have sent it to the correct recipient and checked every line.
我已把它發給正確的收件人,並檢查了每一行。
Thank you for considering my application.
感謝你考慮我的申請。
I look forward to hearing from you.
期待收到你的回覆。
Sign-off: Yours sincerely, Chris Wong (Class 2A)
結語:黃子謙(2A班)敬上。
1Summary 重點摘要
Letters.
2Vocabulary cards Vocabulary
Formal.
Informal.
Email title.
Dear/Hi.
Best regards.
File attached.
To field.
Write back.
3Step by step Steps
- SubjectState the purpose in the title: Application to join the Environment Club — the key verb goes straight in.
- GreetingDear Mr Lam, then identity: I am Chris Wong, a Form 2 student from Class 2A — paragraph one says who you are.
- BodyPurpose → qualities → contribution: I am writing to apply for membership of the School Environment Club. I have loved nature since primary school…
- Sign-offYours sincerely, Chris Wong (Class 2A) — formal letters take Yours sincerely/faithfully, never Cheers.
- Evidence for claimsNever just I am hard-working: I helped my class collect old batteries, and we filled six boxes in one month — numbers persuade.
- Referee and attachmentBoost trust: Miss Ho, my class teacher, can act as my referee. I have attached my application form — please open the attachment.
- RegisterKeep the whole email formal: polite words throughout, and full forms like do not and cannot instead of contractions.
5Worked example Example
Task: write a formal email applying to join the Environment Club — who you are, why you want to join, and what you can contribute.
- Step 1: Make the subject line state your purpose — Application to join the Environment Club.
- Step 2: Greeting + introduce yourself — Dear Mr Lam, I am Chris Wong, a Form 2 student from Class 2A.
- Step 3: State the application and the reason — I am writing to apply for membership… I have loved nature since primary school.
- Step 4: List contributions with evidence — I can help design posters; last year my class collected six boxes of old batteries in one month.
- Step 5: Offer a referee, mention the attachment, and close with Yours sincerely + full name.
- Answer: Subject: Application to join the Environment Club
Dear Mr Lam,
I am Chris Wong, a Form 2 student from Class 2A, and I am writing to apply for membership of the School Environment Club. I have loved nature since primary school, and I joined a beach cleanup with my family last summer. I am hard-working and creative, so I can help design posters and organise recycling bins; last year my class collected six boxes of old batteries in one month. Miss Ho, my class teacher, can act as my referee, and I have attached my application form.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Chris Wong (Class 2A)
6Common mistakes Mistakes
7Quick check Quick check
Q1What is formal?
Q2What is informal?
Q3Where is subject?
Q4What is sign-off?
Q5What is attachment?
8Recap Recap
- Formal email structure: subject line → Dear + title → purpose → contributions → Yours sincerely + full name
- State your purpose in the first line: I am writing to apply for membership of…
- Back up claims with evidence: my class collected six boxes of old batteries in one month
- A referee adds trust: Miss Ho can act as my referee.
- Say so if you attach a file: I have attached my application form. — keep polite words throughout