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For:Secondary 6 English Language · Unit:Speaking · Lesson 17 of 17 in the learning path

After this lesson, you can:
  • Talk structure: introduction (greeting, hook, roadmap), body, advice-driven conclusion.
  • Open ordinary topics with contrast: 'sounds ordinary, but the results are not'.
  • Make the habit too small to fail — three sentences a day — and the audience believes.
文體:Speaking有聲朗讀

文體小知識:Talk for 2 minutes.

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英國語文English Language

§Text Passage

1Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about a small habit that changed my life: keeping a daily journal. My topic sounds ordinary, but I promise the results are not. I have divided my talk into three parts: how I started, what changed, and my advice for you.

2Let me begin with how it started. After failing my first S5 exam, I felt lost and too embarrassed to tell anyone. That night I started writing three sentences a day — just three. At first, the entries were pure complaints: the test, the teacher, the weather. But slowly, writing helped me see patterns in my emotions and study habits. I noticed that I always felt anxious on Sunday nights and always lost focus after two hours of phone scrolling. Naming a problem, I discovered, is halfway to solving it.

3The changes came quietly. Whenever stress built up before exams, the journal became my private counsellor, and writing down my worries emptied them from my head onto the page. Six months later, I was calmer, more focused and more grateful. My grades improved, but more importantly, so did my sleep and my temper. The body of my story is simple: a habit smaller than brushing your teeth rebuilt my confidence.

4In conclusion, my advice is simple: start tonight, write only three sentences, and be honest, because the journal is the one listener that never judges. Keep it fluent and unforced, because a bad sentence written daily beats a perfect page written never. A tiny habit, kept daily, can carry you further than a big plan kept never. Thank you for listening.

§Sentence-by-sentence translation Sentence-by-sentence translation

Good morning, everyone.

各位,早上好。

Today I would like to talk about a small habit that changed my life: keeping a daily journal.

今天我想談一個改變了我人生的小習慣:每天寫日誌。

My topic sounds ordinary, but I promise the results are not.

我的題目聽來平凡,但我保證效果一點也不平凡。

I have divided my talk into three parts: how I started, what changed, and my advice for you.

我的短講分為三部分:我如何開始、帶來甚麼改變,以及給大家的建議。

Let me begin with how it started.

先由我如何開始說起。

After failing my first S5 exam, I felt lost and too embarrassed to tell anyone.

中五首次考試不合格後,我感到迷惘,又羞於向任何人提起。

That night I started writing three sentences a day — just three.

那一晚,我開始每天寫三句話——僅僅三句。

At first, the entries were pure complaints: the test, the teacher, the weather.

起初,內容全是抱怨:測驗、老師、天氣。

But slowly, writing helped me see patterns in my emotions and study habits.

但漸漸地,書寫讓我看清自己情緒和讀書習慣的規律。

I noticed that I always felt anxious on Sunday nights and always lost focus after two hours of phone scrolling.

我發現自己總在星期日晚上焦慮,也總在滑手機兩小時後無法集中。

Naming a problem, I discovered, is halfway to solving it.

我發覺,說出問題的名字,已是解決問題的一半。

The changes came quietly.

改變悄然來臨。

Whenever stress built up before exams, the journal became my private counsellor, and writing down my worries emptied them from my head onto the page.

每逢考試前壓力累積,日誌便成了我的私人輔導員;把憂慮寫下,就是把煩惱從腦海搬到紙上。

Six months later, I was calmer, more focused and more grateful.

六個月後,我變得更平靜、更專注,也更懂得感恩。

My grades improved, but more importantly, so did my sleep and my temper.

成績進步了,但更重要的是,我的睡眠和脾氣也改善了。

The body of my story is simple: a habit smaller than brushing your teeth rebuilt my confidence.

我的故事主體很簡單:一個比刷牙還小的習慣,重建了我的自信。

In conclusion, my advice is simple: start tonight, write only three sentences, and be honest, because the journal is the one listener that never judges.

總括而言,我的建議很簡單:今晚就開始,只寫三句,並且誠實,因為日誌是永不論斷你的聆聽者。

Keep it fluent and unforced, because a bad sentence written daily beats a perfect page written never.

保持流暢自然,因為每天寫下的拙句,勝過永遠沒有出現的完美一頁。

A tiny habit, kept daily, can carry you further than a big plan kept never.

一個每日堅持的小習慣,能帶你走得更遠——勝過一個從未實行的大計劃。

Thank you for listening.

謝謝各位聆聽。

1Summary 重點摘要

Intro → Body → Conclusion.

2Vocabulary cards Vocabulary

i
individual形容詞

Individual.

t
talk名詞

Talk.

t
topic名詞

Topic.

s
structure名詞

Structure.

i
introduction名詞

Intro.

b
body名詞

Body.

c
conclusion名詞

End.

f
fluent形容詞

流暢。

3Step by step Steps

  1. IntroOpen with greeting, hook and a map: “Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about a small habit that changed my life” — an ordinary topic made extraordinary (sounds ordinary, but the results are not); then the map: how I started → what changed → my advice.
  2. BodyTwo or three points, one paragraph each: a concrete start (the night after failing the first S5 exam, three sentences a day — too small to fail) and changes with evidence (the Sunday-night anxiety pattern, two hours lost to scrolling).
  3. EndClose with three doable tips and a contrast line: start tonight, write only three sentences, be honest — “a bad sentence written daily beats a perfect page written never”; then Thank you for listening.
  4. TipThree delivery skills: eye contact (rotate across the examiners), fluency (never recite so tightly you stall), and slow, clear speech — two minutes is short; less but sharper beats more but messy.
  5. Announce the structureAnnouncing the structure gives listeners a map: “I have divided my talk into three parts” — the audience follows, you keep a path even under nerves, and the talk never derails halfway.
  6. Story detailsStories need detail and a turn: the first entries were “pure complaints: the test, the teacher, the weather” before the patterns emerged — from funny to useful, the rhythm flows naturally; a bare “I got better” convinces nobody.
  7. Rehearse timedRehearse with a timer: two minutes not enough? Cut content, never speed up — better one point deep than three points rushed.

5Worked example Example

The two-minute talk on keeping a daily journal shows how a personal habit becomes a persuasive speech. Analyse its structure, storytelling and closing lines.

  1. Step 1: The opening manufactures curiosity from an ordinary topic — 'sounds ordinary, but I promise the results are not' — then maps the three parts.
  2. Step 2: The story starts on a specific night: after failing the first S5 exam, three sentences a day — a habit too small to fail.
  3. Step 3: Change comes with evidence: patterns found in the journal (Sunday-night anxiety, losing focus after scrolling) and 'naming a problem is halfway to solving it'.
  4. Step 4: The journal becomes 'my private counsellor', emptying worries onto the page; grades, sleep and temper all improve.
  5. Step 5: The close offers three commands — start tonight, three sentences, be honest — capped by 'a bad sentence written daily beats a perfect page written never'.
  6. Answer: The talk demonstrates how a tiny topic fills two minutes. Its opening turns an ordinary habit into a promise — 'My topic sounds ordinary, but I promise the results are not' — before announcing the three-part roadmap. The story begins on a precise night, after a failed S5 exam, with a habit deliberately too small to fail: three sentences a day. The middle supplies evidence of change: patterns surfaced by writing — Sunday-night anxiety, lost focus after phone scrolling — proving that naming a problem is halfway to solving it, while the journal acts as a private counsellor moving worries from head to page. Improvements stack: grades, then sleep and temper. Three imperatives close the talk — start tonight, write three sentences, be honest — sealed by the contrast between a bad daily sentence and a perfect page never written.

6Common mistakes Mistakes

✗ No structure
✓ Follow Intro → Body → Conclusion
✗ No eye contact
✓ Keep eye contact
✗ Too fast
✓ Speak slowly and clearly
✗ No examples
✓ Give an example for every point

7Quick check Quick check

Q1Time?

Q2Structure?

Q3Intro?

Q4Body?

Q5Conclusion?

Q6Tip?

8Recap Recap

  • Talk structure: introduction (greeting, hook, roadmap), body, advice-driven conclusion.
  • Open ordinary topics with contrast: 'sounds ordinary, but the results are not'.
  • Make the habit too small to fail — three sentences a day — and the audience believes.
  • Support change with observed evidence: patterns found, lessons named, not just 'I improved'.
  • End with three doable commands plus one contrasting line the audience can carry home.

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