Writing a Postcard

Basic

Keep it short!

For:Primary 5 English Language · Unit:Writing · Lesson 15 of 21 in the learning path

After this lesson, you can:
  • Postcard format: Dear + name, → news → Love, your name.
  • Three news items: the weather, an activity, a feeling.
  • Keep it short — 3 to 5 sentences.
文體:Writing有聲朗讀

文體小知識:Short message from a place.

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英國語文English Language

§Text Passage

1Dear Amy,

2How are you? I am having a great time in Japan with my family. This postcard is from a small town near the mountains. The weather here is cold and snowy, but we are warm and happy. On this trip, we have seen so many new things. Yesterday, we visited a beautiful temple and took many photos. We are staying in a small hotel with a hot spring. Every morning, I look at the snow on the mountains. It looks like a painting. The snow feels soft like cotton. I wish you could see it too.

3I also ate sushi and ramen. The food was very delicious! Tomorrow, we are going to Disneyland. I will buy you a small gift there. I cannot wait to see Mickey Mouse! I am taking many pictures for you. We will take the night train to Tokyo after that. I hope your school days are going well.

4Wish you were here! See you back in Hong Kong next week. Please write back soon. Say hello to your parents for me. Love, Chloe

§Sentence-by-sentence translation Sentence-by-sentence translation

Dear Amy,

親愛的 Amy:

How are you?

你最近好嗎?

I am having a great time in Japan with my family.

我現在和家人在日本玩得好開心。

This postcard is from a small town near the mountains.

這張明信片是在山附近一個小鎮寄出的。

The weather here is cold and snowy, but we are warm and happy.

這裡又凍又下雪,但我們又暖又開心。

On this trip, we have seen so many new things.

這次旅程,我們見到好多新事物。

Yesterday, we visited a beautiful temple and took many photos.

昨天我們去了一間很漂亮的寺廟,拍了很多照片。

We are staying in a small hotel with a hot spring.

我們住在一間有溫泉的小旅館。

Every morning, I look at the snow on the mountains.

每日早上,我都會望住山上的雪。

It looks like a painting.

好像一幅畫那麼漂亮。

The snow feels soft like cotton.

那些雪軟綿綿,好像棉花。

I wish you could see it too.

真希望你都可以看到。

I also ate sushi and ramen.

我還吃了壽司同拉麵。

The food was very delicious!

那些食物真是很好吃!

Tomorrow, we are going to Disneyland.

明天我們會去迪士尼樂園。

I will buy you a small gift there.

我會在那裡買份小禮物給你。

I cannot wait to see Mickey Mouse!

我迫不及待想見米奇老鼠!

I am taking many pictures for you.

我正在拍很多照片給你。

We will take the night train to Tokyo after that.

之後我們會搭夜車去東京。

I hope your school days are going well.

希望你上學順順利利。

Wish you were here!

真希望你也在這裡!

See you back in Hong Kong next week.

下星期香港見!

Please write back soon.

記得快些回信給我。

Say hello to your parents for me.

代我同你爸爸媽媽問好。

Love, Chloe

愛你的,Chloe

1Summary 重點摘要

Keep it short!

2Vocabulary cards Vocabulary

p
postcard名詞

Short card.

D
Dear稱謂

Greeting.

W
Wish you were here短語

Missing you.

w
weather名詞

How it is.

f
food名詞

What you eat.

t
trip名詞

Journey.

L
Love結語

Warm end.

f
from介詞

Showing where something starts.

3Step by step Steps

  1. FormatOn a postcard, the message goes on the left and the address on the right. Example: Write the message on the left and the address on the right. A vertical line usually divides the two sides. The address runs from small to large: the name first, then the flat number, the street and the city. The stamp belongs in the top right corner. Write neatly, because the postman delivers the card by reading the address; a wrong address means a lost card.
  2. ContentA postcard usually covers three parts: the local weather, the activities you did and your feelings. Example: The weather is hot and sunny. I visited the museum. I miss you. Since the space is small, one sentence for each part is enough. Use adjectives such as sunny and rainy for the weather, choose one or two special activities, and put the feeling at the end so the reader feels close, as in I miss you or I hope you can come with me next time.
  3. LengthA postcard is short and precise, usually three to five sentences. Example: Keep the message short and clear. Being short does not mean being empty; every sentence must carry information. Do not turn the postcard into a long diary; cover the key points once. If the space really is not enough, drop the polite phrases and keep only the place, the activities and the wishes. Read it through after writing to make sure the reader understands at first sight.
  4. TenseUse the past tense for things you have already done on the trip, as in I visited the temple and I ate sushi. Use the present tense for the current situation, as in I am in Tokyo and The weather is fine. The tense follows the time: finished actions take the past, while ongoing or regular states take the present. Beginners often write visit instead of visited, so check every verb after writing to make sure the tense matches the time.
  5. Who does which tenseThe two tenses have different jobs on a postcard: finished things use the past, as in I visited the temple, and future plans use will, as in I will come back on Friday. After will, use the base verb; never say will came. Within one paragraph, the tense changes as the time changes. A common structure is to describe the past activities first and then the future arrangement, which keeps the timeline clear and easy for the reader to follow.
  6. Format chantThe writing chant for a postcard is: open with Dear plus the name, then two or three lines of news covering the weather, activities and food, and finally sign off with Love plus your name. Example: Dear Mary, I am in Tokyo... Love, Sue. Note that the greeting ends with a comma, and Love also takes a comma before the name on the next line. Following this chant, four or five lines make a complete postcard, and you will not lose the format marks in tests.

5Worked example Example

Question: How do we cover the key points of a trip in four postcard sentences?

  1. Step 1: Open with the greeting, for example: Dear Mary,
  2. Step 2: Say where you are now, using I am in plus the city name, for example: I am in Tokyo.
  3. Step 3: Give your feelings and activities, using the present for feelings and the past for activities — The food is delicious. I visited the temple.
  4. Step 4: Say when you will return, using will plus the base verb — I will come back on Friday.
  5. Step 5: Sign off with Love plus a comma, and write your name on the next line — Love, then Sue.
  6. Answer: Sample answer: Dear Mary,
    I am in Tokyo. The food is delicious. I visited the temple. I will come back on Friday.
    Love,
    Sue

6Common mistakes Mistakes

✗ Writing 500 words on a postcard
✓ Three to five sentences is enough — short is the point of a postcard.
✗ Dear Mary with no comma
✓ Dear Mary, (a comma follows the name)
✗ I am visit the temple.
✓ I visited the temple. (finished trips take the past tense)
✗ No name at the end
✓ Close with Love, and your name — never skip it.

7Quick check Quick check

Q1Format?

Q2Start?

Q3Content?

Q4End?

Q5Meaning?

Q6Length?

8Recap Recap

  • Postcard format: Dear + name, → news → Love, your name.
  • Three news items: the weather, an activity, a feeling.
  • Keep it short — 3 to 5 sentences.
  • Past tense for what you did (visited); will for what you will do (will come back).
  • Space is tiny, so every sentence must carry something.

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